Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Illness And Replacement
Sarah receives a terminal diagnosis and creates a clone to spare others from grief. The clone begins developing an independent personality.
Key Events
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Blood In The Bed — Sarah awakens and discovers a pool of blood in her bed. Characters: Sarah
Location: Sarah's bedroom
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Terminal Diagnosis — Sarah learns that she is terminally ill. Characters: Sarah
Location: Medical setting
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Clone Commissioned — Sarah chooses to create a clone to spare loved ones from losing her. Characters: Sarah
Location: Clone facility
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Lessons For The Double — Sarah teaches the clone her interests, habits, and lifestyle. Characters: Sarah
Location: Sarah's home
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The Double Develops — The clone begins displaying a distinct personality. Characters: Sarah
Location: Sarah's home
Remission And Rejection
Sarah unexpectedly enters full remission and discovers that Peter and her mother have accepted the clone. Their rejection forces Sarah into a legal fight for survival.
Key Events
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Unexpected Remission — Ten months later, Sarah is told that her illness has fully gone into remission. Characters: Sarah
Location: Medical setting
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The Family Discovery — Sarah finds Peter and the clone with her mother and learns they have been in contact. Characters: Sarah, Peter, Sarah
Location: Sarah's mother's house
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Decommissioning Rejected — Sarah demands decommissioning, but Peter and her mother prefer the clone. Characters: Sarah, Peter, Sarah
Location: Sarah's mother's house
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Duel Ordered By Law — Sarah learns that the two identities must fight publicly to the death. Characters: Sarah
Location: Legal setting
Training For Survival
The law requires a publicized duel to the death. Sarah trains with Trent for a year and prepares herself to kill the clone.
Key Events
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Combat Classes Begin — Sarah begins combat training with Trent for the coming duel. Characters: Sarah, Trent
Location: Trent's gym
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A Year Of Preparation — Over the next year, Sarah improves physically and learns how clone duels operate. Characters: Sarah, Trent
Location: Trent's gym
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Promise To Kill — Sarah tells Peter she bears no ill will but will unapologetically kill the clone. Characters: Sarah, Peter
Location: Meeting place
Temporary Alliance
Sarah encounters the clone, attends a survivors' support group, and agrees to escape across the border. Their apparent cooperation collapses when Sarah's water is poisoned.
Key Events
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The Street Sighting — Sarah spots the clone watching her and chases her toward a nearby playground. Characters: Sarah, Trent
Location: Street near the gym
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Playground Conversation — Sarah and the clone discuss their situation at the playground. Characters: Sarah
Location: Playground
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Duel Survivors Group — The clone takes Sarah to a support group for people who survived their duels. Characters: Sarah
Location: Support group meeting
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Escape Agreement — After bonding, Sarah and the clone agree to cross the border together. Characters: Sarah
Location: Support group meeting
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Forest Hike — The two begin a hike through the forest as part of their escape plan. Characters: Sarah
Location: Forest
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Poisoned Water — Sarah realizes that the clone has poisoned her water during the hike. Characters: Sarah
Location: Forest
Identity Without Freedom
The clone impersonates Sarah at the duel and wins the legal identity ruling. Although she survives, Peter and Sarah's mother leave her trapped in the same emotional burdens.
Key Events
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The False Duel Arrival — The clone arrives alone, claims to be Sarah, and says the clone fled. Characters: Sarah
Location: Duel venue
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Courtroom Identity Ruling — After an investigation and hearing, a judge declares the surviving identity to be Sarah. Characters: Sarah
Location: Courtroom
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The Burden Continues — The new Sarah remains depressed while carrying Peter and her mother's expectations. Characters: Peter, Sarah
Location: New Sarah's home
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Roundabout Breakdown — A threatening message from Sarah's mother leaves the new Sarah crying in stopped traffic. Characters: Sarah
Location: Roundabout