Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Electrified Ground
A storm cuts the power and electrifies worms beneath Fly Creek. Mick arrives for a vacation, but strange evidence and official disbelief quickly disturb the town.
Key Events
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Power Line Hits Wet Ground — A storm topples a power line, electrifying worms beneath the wet ground.
Location: Fly Creek
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Geri Collects Mick — Geri borrows a truck and drives to collect Mick for his vacation visit. Characters: Geri Sanders, Mick
Location: Rural road
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Worm Shipment Escapes — A shipment of bloodworms and sandworms escapes from the back of Roger's truck. Characters: Roger Grimes
Location: Road outside Fly Creek
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Worm Found in Egg Cream — Mick finds a worm in his drink, but the sheriff treats it as a prank. Characters: Mick, Sheriff Jim Reston
Location: Town diner
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Family Introduction — Geri introduces Mick to her family before they leave to visit an antique dealer. Characters: Mick, Geri Sanders
Location: Geri's home
Skeletons and Suspicion
Mick and Geri investigate a disappearing skeleton and eventually find it in Roger's truck. Their discovery connects the missing antique dealer to the escaped worms.
Key Events
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Skeleton Appears — Mick and Geri find a human skeleton outside the apparently empty property. Characters: Mick, Geri Sanders
Location: Antique dealer's property
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Sheriff Dismisses Evidence — The skeleton disappears before the sheriff arrives, causing him to dismiss the report and threaten Mick. Characters: Mick, Geri Sanders, Sheriff Jim Reston
Location: Antique dealer's property
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Skeleton Found in Truck — After investigating the missing antique dealer, Mick and Geri find the skeleton in Roger's truck. Characters: Mick, Geri Sanders, Roger Grimes
Location: Roger's truck
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Fishing Trip Begins — Mick, Geri, and Roger go fishing while trying to maintain an uneasy association. Characters: Mick, Geri Sanders, Roger Grimes
Location: Fishing boat
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Worm Bite and Warning — A worm bites Mick, while Roger reveals his missing thumb and explains that electrified worms attack. Characters: Mick, Geri Sanders, Roger Grimes
Location: Fishing boat
The Worms Turn Violent
A fishing trip reveals the worms' aggression, while Roger is disfigured by an attack. Mick and Geri identify the skeleton and discover another body at the worm farm.
Key Events
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Roger Is Attacked — Worms used as bait attack Roger's face, sending him running into the woods. Characters: Geri Sanders, Roger Grimes
Location: Fishing boat and nearby woods
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Skeleton Identified — Mick and Geri compare the skull's teeth with dental X-rays and confirm the victim's identity. Characters: Mick, Geri Sanders
Location: Abandoned dental office
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Death at the Worm Farm — Mick finds Roger's father dead and being eaten by worms while searching for Roger. Characters: Mick, Geri Sanders, Roger Grimes
Location: Worm farm
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Warnings Are Ignored — Mick and Geri report the deaths, but Sheriff Jim Reston does not act on their warning. Characters: Mick, Geri Sanders, Sheriff Jim Reston
Location: Sheriff's office
Nightfall Over Fly Creek
The worms destroy the safety of Geri's home and begin attacking the wider town. Mick identifies electricity and wet soil as the mechanism and prepares the house for the night.
Key Events
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Tree Crashes Into House — Worms eat through tree roots, causing the tree to crash into the house during dinner. Characters: Mick, Geri Sanders
Location: Geri's home
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Mick Explains the Outbreak — Mick deduces that wet soil conducts electricity and that the worms emerge mainly at night. Characters: Mick, Geri Sanders
Location: Geri's home
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Roger Kidnaps Geri — Roger attacks Mick, knocks him unconscious, enters the house, and kidnaps Geri. Characters: Mick, Geri Sanders, Roger Grimes
Location: Woods and Geri's home
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Townwide Worm Attack — Worms infest the town, killing people in a jail cell and attacking a bar. Characters: Sheriff Jim Reston
Location: Fly Creek
The Final Crawl
Roger kidnaps Geri while the town is overwhelmed. Mick defeats Roger, survives the night with Geri, and returns to the house after power is restored.
Key Events
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Townwide Worm Attack — Worms infest the town, killing people in a jail cell and attacking a bar. Characters: Sheriff Jim Reston
Location: Fly Creek
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House Infested — Mick discovers remains covered in worms, then Roger attacks and chases him downstairs. Characters: Mick, Geri Sanders, Roger Grimes
Location: Geri's home
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Roger Falls Into Worms — Mick pushes Roger into a pile of worms, frees Geri, and is bitten when Roger crawls back out. Characters: Mick, Geri Sanders, Roger Grimes
Location: Geri's home
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Mick Kills Roger — After Roger bites Mick's leg, Mick beats Roger to death with a flashlight. Characters: Mick, Geri Sanders, Roger Grimes
Location: Geri's home
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Power Returns at Dawn — Mick and Geri survive in a tree until morning, when the worms disappear and power is restored. Characters: Mick, Geri Sanders
Location: Tree outside Geri's home
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Alma Emerges Alive — A surviving family member emerges from a chest, and Mick and Geri rush inside to meet her. Characters: Mick, Geri Sanders
Location: Geri's home