Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Homecoming and Hidden Pain
Pete returns to Brooklyn for Christmas leave and encounters his father's uncomfortable public recognition at the VFW. The old soccer slides reveal a painful distance between the father's former identity and his present life.
Key Events
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Pete Returns Home — Pete returns to Brooklyn on Christmas leave from the Navy. Characters: Pete Devlin
Location: Brooklyn
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VFW Holiday Recognition — The local VFW post prepares a Christmas recognition for Pete's father. Characters: Pete Devlin
Location: Local VFW post
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Old Soccer Slides — A slide show presents Pete's father as a young soccer star. Characters: Pete Devlin
Location: Local VFW post
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Slides Interrupted — Pete's father interrupts the slide show and tells the group to stop. Characters: Pete Devlin
Location: Local VFW post
Love Lost in Brooklyn
Pete shares ambitious dreams with Kathleen, but learns that she has begun dating someone else. His romantic disappointment quickly turns into jealousy and reckless anger.
Key Events
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Paris Dreams — Pete tells Kathleen he wants marriage, art, and a new life in Paris. Characters: Pete Devlin, Kathleen
Location: Kathleen's home
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Kathleen Has Moved On — Pete discovers that Kathleen has started dating someone else. Characters: Pete Devlin, Kathleen
Location: Kathleen's home
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Angry Gun Request — Pete asks Patsy for a gun to kill Kathleen's new boyfriend. Characters: Pete Devlin, Patsy
Location: Patsy's place
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Patsy Refuses Sale — Patsy refuses to sell a gun to the drunken Pete. Characters: Pete Devlin, Patsy
Location: Patsy's place
The Gun and the Party
Pete seeks a gun from Patsy and later takes one from his younger brother. At the party, he rejects murder but still attacks Kathleen's new boyfriend before leaving.
Key Events
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A Younger Brother's Plan — Pete discovers that his younger brother has bought a gun for a gas-station robbery. Characters: Pete Devlin
Location: Devlin apartment
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Pete Takes the Gun — Pete takes the gun away from his younger brother. Characters: Pete Devlin
Location: Devlin apartment
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Party Reunion — Kathleen arrives at a party with her new boyfriend while Pete carries the gun. Characters: Pete Devlin, Kathleen
Location: Party
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Gun Through Window — Pete considers using the gun but throws it out of the window instead. Characters: Pete Devlin, Kathleen
Location: Party
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Party Fight — Pete punches Kathleen's new boyfriend, who is knocked unconscious. Characters: Pete Devlin, Kathleen
Location: Party
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Gun Found Nearby — A gun is found on Kathleen's new boyfriend after the fight. Characters: Pete Devlin, Kathleen
Location: Party
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Pete Says Goodbye — Pete says goodbye to Kathleen and walks out of the party. Characters: Pete Devlin, Kathleen
Location: Party
The Sound of the Saw
Pete confronts his father at a bar and demands emotional honesty. His father finally describes the accident, the gangrene, and the amputation that destroyed his soccer identity.
Key Events
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Demand for Honesty — Pete demands that his father explain why he never discusses the accident. Characters: Pete Devlin
Location: Bar
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The Lost Leg Revealed — Pete's father describes gangrene, the hospital, and waking during the amputation. Characters: Pete Devlin
Location: Bar
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Barroom Insult — A young man insults Pete's father by calling him a gimp. Characters: Pete Devlin
Location: Bar
A Gift Beyond Words
Pete and his father respond together when the father is insulted, then drink and sing as they return home. Pete leaves for the Navy with a new sense of freedom and received love.
Key Events
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Father And Son Fight — Pete and his father knock down the insulting young men and throw them out. Characters: Pete Devlin
Location: Bar
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A Father's Gift — Pete leaves for the Navy feeling free after reconnecting with his father. Characters: Pete Devlin
Location: Brooklyn departure point