Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Troubled Homecoming
Peter returns to his family estate while his strained family history and troubled reputation are introduced. Encounters with Lonnie and the women establish the social setting for the coming ordeal.
Key Events
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Peter Reaches The Estate — Peter arrives at his family estate for the weekend and stays with Agnes. Characters: Peter Rake, Agnes
Location: Family estate
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An Old Classmate Appears — Peter encounters Lonnie, his former high school classmate, during the trip. Characters: Peter Rake, Lonnie
Location: Road near the bait shop
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Family Estrangement Surfaces — Peter’s exclusion from his father’s funeral is mentioned while he catches up with family. Characters: Peter Rake
Location: Family estate
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A Candle Request — A woman from across the canyon asks Peter for candles after a power outage. Characters: Peter Rake
Location: Peter’s house
Dinner Beneath The Symbols
Peter hosts a bachelorette dinner and exposes his arrogance through sexist comments. The matching Celtic tattoos quietly suggest that the guests share a hidden purpose.
Key Events
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Dinner Invitation — Peter meets the party near the treehouse and offers to cook dinner for them. Characters: Peter Rake, Marie, Morgan, Elena, Lilith
Location: Old treehouse area
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The Bachelorette Dinner — Peter hosts dinner and behaves charmingly while making increasingly sexist remarks. Characters: Peter Rake, Marie, Morgan, Elena, Lilith
Location: Peter’s dining room
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The Matching Tattoos — Peter notices the same Celtic symbol tattooed on each woman’s wrist. Characters: Peter Rake, Marie, Morgan, Elena, Lilith
Location: Peter’s dining room
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The Strange Awakening — Peter wakes to find Morgan beside him and hears old-time music downstairs. Characters: Peter Rake, Morgan
Location: Peter’s bedroom
The Punishment Unmasked
Peter wakes to bizarre disturbances before being chained and confronted by the women. They accuse him of harming women through harassment, exploitation, and sexual violence.
Key Events
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The Strange Awakening — Peter wakes to find Morgan beside him and hears old-time music downstairs. Characters: Peter Rake, Morgan
Location: Peter’s bedroom
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A Peacock Inside — Peter investigates the music and discovers a peacock inside the house. Characters: Peter Rake
Location: Peter’s house
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Peter Is Chained — The women restrain Peter, threaten him, and dress him in women’s clothing and makeup. Characters: Peter Rake, Marie, Morgan, Elena, Lilith
Location: Peter’s bedroom
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The Women Explain Their Charges — They call themselves angry witches and accuse Peter of past wrongdoing against women. Characters: Peter Rake, Marie, Morgan, Elena, Lilith
Location: Peter’s bedroom
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Peter Attempts A Call — Peter escapes briefly and tries to call emergency services and Lonnie. Characters: Peter Rake
Location: Peter’s house
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Lonnie Investigates — Lonnie arrives and becomes suspicious when the women claim everything is normal. Characters: Peter Rake, Lonnie
Location: Peter’s house
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Agnes Reveals The Family Secret — Agnes sends Lonnie away and the plot reveals that he is her son. Characters: Peter Rake, Agnes, Lonnie
Location: Peter’s house
Flight Through Old Crimes
Peter escapes briefly but is recaptured after Lonnie’s investigation is interrupted. He reaches the treehouse, where visual evidence forces him to confront his past.
Key Events
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Agnes Reveals The Family Secret — Agnes sends Lonnie away and the plot reveals that he is her son. Characters: Peter Rake, Agnes, Lonnie
Location: Peter’s house
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The Chase Begins — Peter is released and chased by the women across the estate grounds. Characters: Peter Rake, Marie, Morgan, Elena, Lilith
Location: Family estate grounds
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Evidence In The Treehouse — Peter finds photographs and articles documenting his alleged crimes and past misconduct. Characters: Peter Rake
Location: Old treehouse
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The Rescue Is A Deception — A supposed rescue turns into another trap as the women surround the car and seize Peter. Characters: Peter Rake, Marie, Morgan, Elena, Lilith
Location: Estate driveway
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Peter Is Tied Down Again — Peter is restrained again, apparently with his hands nailed down. Characters: Peter Rake, Marie, Morgan, Elena, Lilith
Location: Estate grounds
Morning After Reckoning
Peter awakens apparently unharmed, but a phone warning and supernatural-looking flames preserve the threat. He apologizes to his family and receives one final warning before the practical deception is revealed.
Key Events
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The Nightmare Resets — Peter wakes the next morning apparently unharmed and suspects the ordeal was a nightmare. Characters: Peter Rake
Location: Peter’s bedroom
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The Warning Ignites — A phone warning is followed by the burners erupting into flames. Characters: Peter Rake
Location: Peter’s kitchen
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Peter Faces His Daughter — Peter tells his daughter she is precious and asks her never to accept mistreatment from any man. Characters: Peter Rake
Location: Ex-wife’s house
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The Tattooed Delivery Worker — A delivery worker displays the same Celtic tattoo and warns that she is watching Peter. Characters: Peter Rake
Location: Ex-wife’s house
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The Practical Trick Revealed — The women reveal that the witchcraft was practical deception supported by Agnes and drugged food. Characters: Marie, Morgan, Elena, Lilith, Agnes
Location: Peter’s house