Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
An Uneasy Saturday Visit
Martha worries about the household's finances as Tony and Mike arrive to visit Bill. Conversation brings their military past into the home, while Bill remains uncomfortable discussing the war.
Key Events
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Martha Searches for Affordable Housing — Martha worries about finances and looks for an affordable place to live. Characters: Martha Wayne, Harry Wayne
Location: Connecticut farmhouse
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Visitors Arrive — Tony and Mike arrive as Bill's former army companions. Characters: Bill Schmidt, Tony Rodrigues, Mike Nickerson
Location: Connecticut farmhouse
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War Memories Surface — Conversation turns to military service and the dangers of Vietnam. Characters: Bill Schmidt, Martha Wayne, Tony Rodrigues, Mike Nickerson, Harry Wayne
Location: Connecticut farmhouse
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Martha Asks About Vietnam — Martha asks about Vietnam, which Bill has never discussed with her. Characters: Martha Wayne, Bill Schmidt
Location: Connecticut farmhouse
War Stories and Unspoken History
The men compare their experiences and debate the difficulty of recognizing an enemy. Tony offers reassurance, but Bill admits that the past remains on his mind.
Key Events
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Men Debate the Enemy — The men compare wars and discuss the difficulty of identifying an enemy. Characters: Bill Schmidt, Tony Rodrigues, Mike Nickerson, Harry Wayne
Location: Connecticut farmhouse
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Bill's Discomfort Emerges — Bill's discomfort with fighting contrasts with the others' reminiscences and jokes. Characters: Bill Schmidt, Tony Rodrigues, Mike Nickerson
Location: Connecticut farmhouse
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Tony Offers Reassurance — Tony says he came partly to assure Bill that he holds no hard feelings. Characters: Bill Schmidt, Tony Rodrigues
Location: Connecticut farmhouse
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Bill Recalls What Happened — Bill says he thinks about what happened every day but cannot put his companions through another ordeal. Characters: Bill Schmidt, Tony Rodrigues, Mike Nickerson
Location: Connecticut farmhouse
A Visit That Will Not End
The men watch football, talk, and drink while Martha grows tired of their prolonged presence. Their casual stories do not dispel the unease surrounding Bill's past.
Key Events
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Bill Recalls What Happened — Bill says he thinks about what happened every day but cannot put his companions through another ordeal. Characters: Bill Schmidt, Tony Rodrigues, Mike Nickerson
Location: Connecticut farmhouse
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The Visit Continues — The men watch a football game, talk, and drink as the visit stretches on. Characters: Bill Schmidt, Tony Rodrigues, Mike Nickerson
Location: Connecticut farmhouse
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Martha Grows Weary — Martha complains that she cannot endure another night of the company. Characters: Martha Wayne, Bill Schmidt, Tony Rodrigues, Mike Nickerson
Location: Connecticut farmhouse
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Tony Tells a Mechanic Story — Tony recounts a story about a dishonest mechanic. Characters: Tony Rodrigues, Bill Schmidt, Mike Nickerson
Location: Connecticut farmhouse
The Question of the Girl
Martha speaks about Harry's writing and recalls Bill's account of an incident involving a Vietnamese girl. Bill confronts Tony and demands to know why it happened; the supplied account ends before a response or consequence is given.
Key Events
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Martha Discusses Harry's Writing — Martha privately calls Harry's later writing angry and hollow. Characters: Martha Wayne, Harry Wayne
Location: Connecticut farmhouse
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Martha Recalls the Girl — Martha recalls Bill's account of an incident involving a Vietnamese girl. Characters: Martha Wayne, Bill Schmidt
Location: Connecticut farmhouse
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Bill Challenges Tony — Bill presses Tony about what happened and rejects the excuse that everyone did it. Characters: Bill Schmidt, Tony Rodrigues
Location: Connecticut farmhouse
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The Confrontation Remains Unresolved — The available dialogue ends before Tony's response or the consequences are shown. Characters: Bill Schmidt, Tony Rodrigues
Location: Connecticut farmhouse