Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Return and an Unwanted Demand
Kate returns from the city to visit her ailing father. Bertrum insists she shoot Mel, but Kate refuses, and the dispute is complicated by Bertrum's drinking and Dane's presence in detox.
Key Events
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Kate Returns from the City — Kate comes back to visit her ailing father. Characters: Kate, Bertrum
Location: Family home
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Bertrum Demands Mel Be Shot — Bertrum insists Kate shoot his difficult horse. Characters: Kate, Bertrum
Location: Family home
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Kate Refuses — Kate rejects Bertrum's demand despite his insistence. Characters: Kate, Bertrum
Location: Family home
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Bertrum's Trust Intensifies the Dispute — Bertrum says Kate is the only person he trusts to do it. Characters: Kate, Bertrum
Location: Family home
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Dane Is in Detox — Bertrum's brother Dane is present in detox. Characters: Bertrum, Uncle Dane
Location: Family setting
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The Family Manages Jilly — Jilly's sisters try to keep her from dating and drinking. Characters: Jilly, Rita
Location: Family home
Family Strain at Home
The family struggles to manage Jilly, while Rita tries to look after her. Grandma is confused by the upheaval and worries about Bertrum; she declines Kate's suggestion to visit New York.
Key Events
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The Family Manages Jilly — Jilly's sisters try to keep her from dating and drinking. Characters: Jilly, Rita
Location: Family home
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Rita Tries to Help Jilly — Rita attempts to look after Jilly. Characters: Rita, Jilly
Location: Family home
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Grandma Worries About Bertrum — Grandma is confused by the upheaval and worried about Bertrum. Characters: Grandma, Bertrum
Location: Family home
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Kate Invites Grandma to New York — Kate suggests Grandma visit her in New York. Characters: Kate, Grandma
Location: Family home
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Grandma Chooses to Stay — Grandma refuses to leave her family behind. Characters: Kate, Grandma
Location: Family home
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The Argument Over Mel Continues — Kate and Bertrum continue to dispute what should happen to Mel. Characters: Kate, Bertrum
Location: Family home
Mel and the Search
Kate finally says she will not shoot Mel. After Mel escapes, Rita finds him and brings him back, while the search for Jilly leads the family into the woods.
Key Events
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The Argument Over Mel Continues — Kate and Bertrum continue to dispute what should happen to Mel. Characters: Kate, Bertrum
Location: Family home
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Kate Will Not Shoot Mel — Kate finally admits she will not shoot the horse. Characters: Kate, Bertrum
Location: Family home
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Mel Escapes — Mel gets away from the family.
Location: Unspecified
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Rita Brings Mel Back — Rita finds Mel and brings him back. Characters: Rita
Location: Unspecified
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The Family Searches for Jilly — The family search for Jilly draws them into the woods. Characters: Kate, Rita, Jilly, Grandma
Location: Woods
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Rita Trusts Mel to Return — Rita trusts Mel to find his own way home. Characters: Rita, Kate
Location: Woods
Lost Among the Trees
Kate worries that the search has gone on too long, while Bertrum rants about the family and pursues a confrontation. The sisters become lost, look for familiar landmarks such as a radio tower, and remain unable to find their way out.
Key Events
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Kate Worries About Grandma — Kate worries they have been away too long and Grandma will be concerned. Characters: Kate, Grandma
Location: Woods
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Bertrum Rants About the Family — Bertrum rants about the family and reveals hostility and prejudice. Characters: Bertrum
Location: Unspecified
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Bertrum Pursues a Confrontation — Bertrum pursues a confrontation. Characters: Bertrum
Location: Unspecified
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The Sisters Lose Their Way — The sisters become lost and search for familiar landmarks. Characters: Kate, Rita, Jilly
Location: Woods
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They Look for the Radio Tower — The sisters try to orient themselves using a radio tower as a landmark. Characters: Kate, Rita, Jilly
Location: Woods
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Their Fate Remains Unresolved — The dialogue ends with the sisters still trying to find their way out. Characters: Kate, Rita, Jilly
Location: Woods