Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Building Turns Hostile
A lightning strike precedes a series of elevator malfunctions in the Millennium Building. Jennifer is assigned to investigate while technicians fail to acknowledge a defect.
Key Events
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Lightning Hits Millennium Building — A stray lightning bolt strikes the 102-floor building and precedes the elevator malfunctions.
Location: Millennium Building
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Elevators Act Strangely — The express elevators behave abnormally, crushing a guard's flashlight.
Location: Millennium Building elevators
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Pregnant Women Trapped — Pregnant women are trapped; the elevator overheats and two women give birth.
Location: Floors 21 and 22
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Jennifer Receives Assignment — Jennifer is assigned to report on the elevator incident. Characters: Jennifer Evans
Location: New York City newsroom
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Technicians Inspect Elevators — Mark participates in an inspection that finds no acknowledged technical defect. Characters: Mark Newman
Location: Millennium Building
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Blind Man Disappears — A blind man and his guide dog disappear inside the building.
Location: Millennium Building
Evidence Beneath the Official Story
Deaths and disappearances escalate as Jennifer documents an impossible elevator speed. She and Mark begin connecting the incidents to organic computer-chip research.
Key Events
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Guard Finds Corpse — A guard discovers a corpse in the shaft, revealing that the incidents are lethal. Characters: Milligan
Location: Elevator shaft
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Journalist Challenges Official Story — Jennifer publishes a technician's sarcastic survival remark, provoking controversy. Characters: Jennifer Evans
Location: New York City newsroom
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Roller Skater Dies — A roller skater is pulled into an elevator and ejected from the eighty-sixth floor.
Location: Parking garage and Millennium Building
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Jennifer Reviews Death Tape — Jennifer shows Mark footage proving the elevator reached the eighty-sixth floor impossibly fast. Characters: Jennifer Evans, Mark Newman
Location: Mark's residence
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Chip Research Investigation — Jennifer and Mark investigate a dismissed scientist's experiments with organic computer chips. Characters: Jennifer Evans, Mark Newman
Location: Jennifer's office
The Terrorism Cover-Up
A corpse is discovered, but authorities construct a terrorism explanation. A catastrophic elevator ascent intensifies the public crisis and brings a terrorism unit into the building.
Key Events
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Milligan Finds Technician — Milligan discovers the technician's corpse inside the shaft. Characters: Milligan
Location: Elevator shaft
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Police Construct Cover Story — Jennifer and Mark learn that police blame the incidents on terrorism to reassure the public. Characters: Jennifer Evans, Mark Newman
Location: Millennium Building
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Elevator Reaches Roof — An elevator shoots upward, its floor separates, and everyone inside is killed.
Location: Millennium Building upper floors
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Terrorism Unit Arrives — A terrorism unit assembles in the building to search for additional threats.
Location: Millennium Building
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Superstitious Widow Offers Clue — Jennifer and Mark connect a recent suicide with a widow's belief in returning punishment. Characters: Jennifer Evans, Mark Newman
Location: New York City
Into the Elevator Shaft
Jennifer and Mark pursue a biological explanation and infiltrate the building. Jennifer is detained while Mark discovers the living bio-chip controlling the elevators.
Key Events
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Jennifer Infiltrates Building — Jennifer poses as a METEOR executive while Mark attempts to enter the building. Characters: Jennifer Evans, Mark Newman
Location: Millennium Building entrance
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Jennifer Is Taken Custody — Jennifer is detained after authorities challenge her claimed identity. Characters: Jennifer Evans
Location: Millennium Building
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Phone Call Reveals Continued Experiments — A phone call informs Jennifer that the former scientist continued developing the project with another biological source. Characters: Jennifer Evans
Location: Custody area
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Mark Finds Living Bio-Chip — Mark discovers a living brain-shaped bio-chip controlling the elevators. Characters: Mark Newman
Location: Elevator shaft
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Flaming Elevator Attacks — The bio-chip sends a flaming elevator downward, forcing Mark to escape. Characters: Mark Newman
Location: Elevator shaft
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Mark Obtains Stinger Launcher — Mark acquires a Stinger launcher and prepares to destroy the bio-chip. Characters: Mark Newman
Location: Millennium Building
Destroying the Living Machine
Jennifer frees Mark during a hostage standoff, and Mark uses the launcher to destroy the bio-chip. The pair later leave the hospital together after Mark's romantic deception.
Key Events
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Mark Obtains Stinger Launcher — Mark acquires a Stinger launcher and prepares to destroy the bio-chip. Characters: Mark Newman
Location: Millennium Building
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Jennifer Frees Mark — Jennifer escapes custody and frees Mark during the confrontation around the bio-chip. Characters: Jennifer Evans, Mark Newman
Location: Elevator shaft
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Hostage Standoff — Police enter, a hostage standoff begins, and Jennifer escapes when her captor fails to recognize a superior. Characters: Jennifer Evans, Mark Newman
Location: Elevator shaft
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Bio-Chip Destroyed — Jennifer kicks the launcher to Mark, who destroys the bio-chip controlling the elevators. Characters: Jennifer Evans, Mark Newman
Location: Elevator shaft
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Hospital Elevator Ruse — After leaving the hospital, Mark stages an elevator problem to make a romantic overture toward Jennifer. Characters: Jennifer Evans, Mark Newman
Location: Hospital elevator