Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Rivalries Among the Growers
The annual vegetable championships introduce Caroline and the competitive growing scene. Caroline's marrow causes a stir before later events make her believe her plants have been targeted.
Key Events
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Championship Documentary — A filmmaker documents competitive growers and their rivalries at the annual championships. Characters: Caroline, Tony Knight
Location: Big Vegetable Championships, Shepton Mallet
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Caroline's Prizewinning Vegetables — Caroline is introduced as a grower known for her prize-winning vegetables. Characters: Caroline
Location: Big Vegetable Championships, Shepton Mallet
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Gary Causes a Stir — Caroline's marrow, Gary, causes a stir at the competition. Characters: Caroline
Location: Big Vegetable Championships, Shepton Mallet
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Plants Seem Targeted — Later events leave Caroline convinced that someone has targeted her plants. Characters: Caroline
Location: Caroline's growing area
An Unaffordable Investigation
Caroline asks Paul for help, and he suspects that a listening device could have exposed when her plants were vulnerable. Unable to afford professional investigators, Paul and Willy follow leads themselves.
Key Events
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Caroline Seeks Help — Worried and angry, Caroline asks for help finding who is responsible. Characters: Caroline, Paul
Location: Not specified
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Paul Takes the Case — Paul takes the investigation seriously after returning to Caroline's life. Characters: Caroline, Paul
Location: Not specified
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Listening Device Suspected — Paul suspects a device was planted to reveal when Caroline's plants would be vulnerable. Characters: Caroline, Paul
Location: Caroline's home
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Investigators Too Costly — The private investigators' fee exceeds Caroline's means, so Paul and Willy pursue leads themselves. Characters: Caroline, Paul, Willy
Location: Not specified
Suspicion at the Allotments
A café's marrow dishes lead Paul to suspect Tony's operation, and he and Willy conduct reconnaissance. The investigators' report clears Tony but challenges another grower's conference account, prompting the group to plan a confrontation.
Key Events
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Café Menu Raises Suspicion — Paul notices marrow dishes on the café specials and suspects Tony's growing operation. Characters: Paul, Willy, Tony Knight
Location: Vegan café
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Allotment Reconnaissance — Paul and Willy conduct reconnaissance despite Caroline's request for discretion. Characters: Paul, Willy
Location: Xomort allotments
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Tony's Alibi Confirmed — The report clears Tony, whose alibi is supported by witnesses. Characters: Tony Knight
Location: Not specified
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Conference Account Challenged — The report says a suspect's account of attending a conference does not hold up.
Location: Business conference
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Decision to Confront — The group decides to confront the suspected grower, later admitting they should have contacted police. Characters: Caroline, Paul, Willy
Location: Not specified
The Transmitter's Warning
Caroline confronts Linda, who admits arranging for a plant to be taken and a transmitter installed. The active device reveals a discussion of an attack on Caroline, and a voice she recognizes connects the danger to Xomort.
Key Events
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Linda's Confession — Linda admits arranging for a plant to be taken and a transmitter left to hear Caroline's growing techniques. Characters: Caroline, Linda
Location: Not specified
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Caroline Rejects Linda's Excuse — Linda says the plan failed and went further than intended; Caroline is furious about its consequences. Characters: Caroline, Linda
Location: Not specified
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Transmitter Still Active — Linda reveals that the transmitter is still picking up sounds from Caroline's house. Characters: Caroline, Linda
Location: Caroline's home
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Threat Heard Through Device — They hear two unidentified men discussing how to attack Caroline when she comes home. Characters: Caroline, Linda
Location: Caroline's home
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Voice Linked to Xomort — Caroline recognizes one voice as connected to a man from Xomort, leaving the danger unresolved. Characters: Caroline, Linda
Location: Caroline's home