Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Arrival and a Separated Marriage
Takeshi travels to Ajiro to care for Michio and is welcomed by Noriko. Her account of their long, illness-marked marriage establishes the uncertainty surrounding their future.
Key Events
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Atami Station in Blossom Season — Takeshi prepares to travel to Ajiro during cherry-blossom season. Characters: Takeshi Ema
Location: Atami Station
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Assignment to Ajiro — Takeshi travels to care for a patient in place of another doctor. Characters: Takeshi Ema
Location: Atami Station
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Noriko Welcomes Takeshi — Noriko welcomes Takeshi to the villa where her husband is recovering. Characters: Takeshi Ema, Noriko Kuki
Location: Kuki villa, Ajiro
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A Marriage Marked by Separation — Noriko's seven-year marriage has included only one year living together as husband and wife. Characters: Noriko Kuki, Michio Kuki
Location: Kuki villa, Ajiro
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Takeshi Treats Michio — Takeshi begins treating Michio as he recovers from illness. Characters: Takeshi Ema, Michio Kuki
Location: Kuki villa, Ajiro
Closeness Beneath the Conversation
Takeshi and Noriko grow close through conversations about their lives and feelings. His poems and her encouragement bring their emotional differences and growing attraction into view.
Key Events
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Conversations Grow Personal — Takeshi and Noriko talk about their lives and feelings as they grow close. Characters: Takeshi Ema, Noriko Kuki
Location: Kuki villa, Ajiro
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Poems and Melancholy — Takeshi reads Noriko poems that reveal his melancholy outlook. Characters: Takeshi Ema, Noriko Kuki
Location: Kuki villa, Ajiro
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Noriko Urges Hope — Noriko encourages Takeshi to be more hopeful, and he notices her livelier manner. Characters: Takeshi Ema, Noriko Kuki
Location: Kuki villa, Ajiro
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The Preserved Engagement Ring — Noriko explains the significance of the engagement ring she kept safe since wartime. Characters: Takeshi Ema, Noriko Kuki
Location: Plum park
The Ring and the Confession
At the plum park, Noriko explains the meaning of her preserved engagement ring, and Takeshi asks whether she loves him. His confession that he wished Michio would die turns their attraction into a painful moral crisis.
Key Events
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Takeshi Asks About Love — Takeshi asks whether Noriko loves him; she resists answering as their attraction becomes undeniable. Characters: Takeshi Ema, Noriko Kuki
Location: Plum park
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A Frightening Wish Confessed — Takeshi admits he wished Michio would die and doubts he can continue treating him. Characters: Takeshi Ema, Noriko Kuki, Michio Kuki
Location: Ajiro
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Noriko Names Her Conflict — Noriko says she loves her husband and describes her feelings for Takeshi as a passing fever. Characters: Takeshi Ema, Noriko Kuki, Michio Kuki
Location: Ajiro
A Meeting Without Resolution
Takeshi asks Noriko to meet him at an inn, and she later comes, carrying Michio's request that Takeshi return. She explains that she came because she trusts him, while both remain caught in unresolved feelings and obligations.
Key Events
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An Invitation to the Inn — Takeshi urges Noriko to meet him at an inn during her next trip. Characters: Takeshi Ema, Noriko Kuki
Location: Ajiro
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Noriko Comes to the Inn — Noriko meets Takeshi and says Michio regrets his behavior and wants Takeshi to return. Characters: Takeshi Ema, Noriko Kuki
Location: Inn
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Trust Amid Confusion — Noriko says anger and confusion prompted her to contact Takeshi, but she came because she trusts him. Characters: Takeshi Ema, Noriko Kuki
Location: Inn
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Shame and Unresolved Feelings — Takeshi feels ashamed of his earlier hopes; Noriko remains conflicted as Michio's recovery and their relationships remain unresolved. Characters: Takeshi Ema, Noriko Kuki, Michio Kuki
Location: Inn