Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Blood Money and Revenge
A criminal alliance forms around a robbery and a murderous plan involving Frank Banner. The surviving brother reaches Christian Flats, confronts Frank, and kills Rick Largo.
Key Events
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Bank Robbery Escape — Frank Banner and Rick Largo flee after the bank robbery with the stolen money. Characters: Frank Banner, Rick Largo
Location: The road after the bank robbery
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The Brother Shooting — Largo convinces Frank to shoot his own brother so they can divide the booty. Characters: Frank Banner, Rick Largo
Location: An unspecified roadside location
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Frank's False Death — Frank's brother only pretends to be dead after the shooting. Characters: Frank Banner
Location: The roadside
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Arrival at Christian Flats — After walking forty miles with his saddle, Frank's brother reaches Christian Flats. Characters: Frank Banner
Location: Christian Flats
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The Last Horse — The arriving traveler buys the last horse in town.
Location: Christian Flats
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Banner Family Duel — Frank faces his brother in a shoot-out and misses. Characters: Frank Banner
Location: Christian Flats
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Frank Is Spared — Frank's brother spares him and orders him to leave town. Characters: Frank Banner
Location: Christian Flats
Amy Claims the Stage
Amy Clarke pursues money stolen from her and secures a place on a dangerous stagecoach. The arrival of an arrow-filled coach reveals that the journey will be lethal.
Key Events
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Frank Is Spared — Frank's brother spares him and orders him to leave town. Characters: Frank Banner
Location: Christian Flats
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Largo's Death — A shoot-out with Largo ends with Largo dead. Characters: Rick Largo
Location: Christian Flats
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Amy Seeks Her Money — Amy travels toward Laramie to recover money stolen by her former sweetheart and crooked agent. Characters: Amy Clarke
Location: Abilene
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The Garters Bribe — Amy bribes the clerk with a scented garter to obtain a stagecoach seat. Characters: Amy Clarke
Location: The stagecoach office
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Arrow-Filled Stage — The overdue stage arrives with the driver and horses full of arrows and every passenger dead. Characters: Amy Clarke, Minstrel, Mark Chester
Location: The stagecoach station
Stranded Under Fire
The travelers discover Frank's arrow-pierced corpse before a broken wheel strands them in a dry creek gully. A Cheyenne ambush kills Mark Chester and leaves the group trapped without water.
Key Events
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Journey Begins — Amy insists on taking the stage and arranges for the newly purchased horse to pull it. Characters: Amy Clarke, Minstrel, Mark Chester
Location: The road to Laramie
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Frank's Arrowed Corpse — The travelers find Frank's corpse in a waterhole, pierced by Cheyenne arrows. Characters: Frank Banner, Amy Clarke, Minstrel, Mark Chester
Location: A waterhole
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Stagecoach Wreck — A broken wheel wrecks the stage, and the team of horses runs away. Characters: Amy Clarke, Minstrel, Mark Chester
Location: The stagecoach route
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Chester Is Killed — A Cheyenne ambush kills Chester, whose bag contains fool's gold. Characters: Amy Clarke, Minstrel, Mark Chester
Location: A dry creek gully
Thirst and Failed Words
The survivors endure rifle attacks, heat, thirst, and a fatal mirage. Minstrel dies, and a peace appeal fails when its speaker is shot.
Key Events
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The Rifle Battle — The stranded travelers fight a full-scale rifle battle while thirst worsens. Characters: Amy Clarke, Minstrel
Location: The dry creek gully
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The Mirage Walk — Minstrel follows a mirage, while another delirious traveler holds a gun on the driver. Characters: Amy Clarke, Minstrel
Location: The desert near the gully
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Minstrel's Death — Cheyenne attackers shoot Minstrel after he ventures toward the imagined water. Characters: Amy Clarke, Minstrel
Location: The desert near the gully
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The Failed Peace Appeal — A pacifist passenger approaches with open arms and is shot after appealing for brotherhood. Characters: Amy Clarke
Location: The rocks above the gully
Water, Mercy, and Departure
Rain fills the gully after a desperate search for a dry canteen, but Hamilton is already dead. The final attacker is spared, and a gift of horses closes the journey with an act of friendship.
Key Events
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The Dry Canteen — The driver risks his life for a planted canteen but finds it dry. Characters: Amy Clarke
Location: The gully and surrounding rocks
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Rainwater Floods Gully — Rain from higher ground suddenly fills the gully with water. Characters: Amy Clarke
Location: The dry creek gully
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Hamilton's Death — Amy brings water to Hamilton but discovers that he has died. Characters: Amy Clarke
Location: The dry creek gully
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Knife Fight in Floodwater — The last surviving attacker fights the driver with a knife after running out of rifle ammunition.
Location: The flooded gully
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A Life Is Spared — The driver nearly drowns the attacker but spares him and sends him back to his people.
Location: The flooded gully
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Promise and Return — The driver promises to clear Hamilton's name and return the money before Amy embraces him. Characters: Amy Clarke
Location: The road to Laramie
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The Gift of Horses — The spared attacker returns with two horses as a gift and says the walk is part of the gift. Characters: Amy Clarke
Location: The desert road