Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The 880 Investigation Begins
Steve Buchanan studies amateur counterfeit bills marked by an obvious spelling mistake. He follows their spending patterns through Brooklyn and the Bronx.
Key Events
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Case 880 Briefing — Steve and his boss discuss the fake bills known as 880s. Characters: Steve Buchanan
Location: Secret Service office
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The Obvious Spelling Error — The bills spell Washington as Wahsington but still circulate. Characters: Steve Buchanan
Location: Secret Service office
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Spending Pattern Analysis — Steve tracks where the counterfeit bills have been spent. Characters: Steve Buchanan
Location: Secret Service office
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Brooklyn and Bronx Search — Steve investigates neighborhoods connected to the counterfeit notes. Characters: Steve Buchanan
Location: Brooklyn and the Bronx
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Counterfeit Change Passed — An elderly junk dealer returns two 880 bills as change for an ornament.
Location: A local shop
A Suspicious First Date
Ann unknowingly spends an 880 and becomes the subject of Steve's investigation. After learning his Secret Service identity, she creates false clues during their date.
Key Events
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Ann Spends an 880 — Ann unknowingly spends one counterfeit bill at a surveilled business. Characters: Ann Winslow
Location: A local business
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Steve Approaches Ann — Steve asks Ann for a date to investigate her possible involvement. Characters: Steve Buchanan, Ann Winslow
Location: A local business
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Secret Service Discovery — Ann learns from a business owner that Steve works for the Secret Service. Characters: Ann Winslow, Steve Buchanan
Location: A local business
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Ann Plants False Clues — Ann studies counterfeiting and prepares misleading clues for the date. Characters: Ann Winslow
Location: Ann's home
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The Counterfeiters' Dinner — Ann uses false clues and outdated slang to maintain Steve's interest. Characters: Steve Buchanan, Ann Winslow
Location: A restaurant
Compassion Under Pressure
Steve clears Ann and continues dating her, while the elderly printer produces more bills to pay a veterinary expense. Ann helps him find handyman work as the counterfeit risk increases.
Key Events
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Ann Is Cleared — Steve realizes Ann is not involved in criminal activity. Characters: Steve Buchanan, Ann Winslow
Location: A local business
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Dating Continues — Steve and Ann continue dating after her innocence is established. Characters: Steve Buchanan, Ann Winslow
Location: New York City
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Veterinary Bill Pressure — An elderly man facing a twenty-dollar veterinary bill prints more one-dollar bills.
Location: A neighborhood home
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Warning Flyers Appear — Businesses display flyers explaining how to identify counterfeit 880 bills.
Location: Local businesses
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Printing Press Buried — The elderly printer hides his press and extra bills in the cellar.
Location: A cellar
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A Handyman Job Arranged — Ann arranges a handyman job for the elderly man. Characters: Ann Winslow
Location: The neighborhood
The Hidden Printer Exposed
Steve declines a French assignment while Ann identifies Mister 880. A dog leads a boy to the hidden cellar, and the newly spent bills give Steve a trail to follow.
Key Events
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France Offer Declined — Steve declines a France assignment because of Ann and the unresolved case. Characters: Steve Buchanan, Ann Winslow
Location: Secret Service office
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Ann Identifies Mister 880 — Ann determines that the elderly junk dealer is Mister 880. Characters: Ann Winslow
Location: The neighborhood
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The Dog Finds the Cellar — A dog leads a neighborhood boy to the cellar and its hidden evidence.
Location: A cellar
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The Bills Spread Again — The boy begins spending the counterfeit bills found in the cellar.
Location: The neighborhood
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Steve Questions Boys — Steve questions boys who received the bills and follows the trail. Characters: Steve Buchanan
Location: The neighborhood
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Mister 880 Revealed — The investigation finally leads Steve to the elderly printer. Characters: Steve Buchanan, Ann Winslow
Location: The neighborhood
Justice Tempered With Mercy
Steve arrests the counterfeiter despite Ann's plea for leniency. At trial, Steve supports a reduced punishment, and the judge grants a sentence allowing early parole eligibility.
Key Events
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Mister 880 Revealed — The investigation finally leads Steve to the elderly printer. Characters: Steve Buchanan, Ann Winslow
Location: The neighborhood
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Ann Pleads for Leniency — Ann asks Steve to show mercy, but he insists the law cannot be ignored. Characters: Steve Buchanan, Ann Winslow
Location: The neighborhood
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Arrest and Admission — Steve arrests the elderly counterfeiter, who admits making the bills. Characters: Steve Buchanan
Location: The neighborhood
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Trial Defense Offered — Ann's lawyer friend agrees to plead the case without charge. Characters: Ann Winslow
Location: The courthouse
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Fabricated Account Withdrawn — The defendant abandons a fabricated account and admits making the press and plates.
Location: The courthouse
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Steve Requests Mercy — Steve argues for leniency because the crime was not motivated by greed. Characters: Steve Buchanan
Location: The courthouse
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Reduced Prison Sentence — The judge imposes one year and one day, allowing parole eligibility after four months.
Location: The courthouse