Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Bonus Becomes a Grudge
Carruthers receives a small bonus despite his work generating substantial company income. His employers cite his earlier buyout, but he feels insulted and turns to revenge.
Key Events
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Carruthers Receives a Small Bonus — Carruthers receives a $5,000 bonus for work that earned the company a million dollars. Characters: Dr. Paul Carruthers
Location: Heathville
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The Company Explains Its Offer — His employers say he accepted an early buyout instead of keeping a partnership stake. Characters: Dr. Paul Carruthers
Location: Company
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Resentment Becomes Revenge — Carruthers feels insulted by the bonus and decides to seek revenge. Characters: Dr. Paul Carruthers
Location: Heathville
The Scented Bat Trap
Carruthers develops a system to enlarge bats and trains them to follow his pungent aftershave. He distributes the lotion to his enemies as a test product, preparing the attacks.
Key Events
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Carruthers Enlarges Bats — Carruthers develops a system for enlarging ordinary bats. Characters: Dr. Paul Carruthers
Location: Heathville
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The Aftershave Attracts Bats — He trains the bats to follow the pungent aftershave he is testing. Characters: Dr. Paul Carruthers
Location: Heathville
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Enemies Receive Test Lotion — Carruthers distributes the lotion to his enemies as a test product. Characters: Dr. Paul Carruthers
Location: Heathville
A Murder Investigation Begins
Carruthers releases the bats against the families of his employers, and the attacks kill the owner's sons and his partner. Johnny is assigned to investigate and works with McGuire to unravel the mystery.
Key Events
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Nighttime Bat Attacks Begin — Carruthers releases the bats at night to target his employers' families. Characters: Dr. Paul Carruthers
Location: Heathville
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The Owners' Sons Are Killed — The attacks kill the owner's two sons. Characters: Dr. Paul Carruthers
Location: Heathville
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The Partner Is Killed — Carruthers's bat attacks also kill his employers' partner. Characters: Dr. Paul Carruthers
Location: Heathville
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Johnny Receives the Assignment — Johnny is assigned to cover and help solve the murders. Characters: Johnny Layton
Location: Chicago Register
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McGuire Joins the Investigation — Johnny and his photographer begin investigating the unexplained murders. Characters: Johnny Layton, 'One-Shot' McGuire
Location: Heathville
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The Mystery Unwinds — The reporter and photographer work to uncover the mystery behind the attacks. Characters: Johnny Layton, 'One-Shot' McGuire
Location: Heathville
The Master Falls
Mary is the last surviving member of her family. Johnny dumps aftershave on Carruthers, and the attracted bat kills its own master before Mary runs into Johnny's arms.
Key Events
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Mary Remains the Sole Survivor — Mary is left as the last surviving member of her family. Characters: Mary Heath
Location: Heathville
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Johnny Uses the Aftershave — Johnny dumps a sample of the aftershave on Carruthers. Characters: Johnny Layton, Dr. Paul Carruthers
Location: Heathville
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The Bat Kills Its Master — Drawn to the aftershave, a Devil Bat attacks and kills Carruthers. Characters: Dr. Paul Carruthers, Johnny Layton
Location: Heathville
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Mary Runs to Johnny — After Carruthers's death, Mary runs into Johnny's arms. Characters: Mary Heath, Johnny Layton
Location: Heathville