Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Discharge And Disappointment
The former soldiers return home and lose their taxi garage jobs after a fight. Pappy's concealment of the college letter briefly damages his friendship with the protagonist.
Key Events
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Return From Service — The protagonist and Pappy return from three years of Army service and resume civilian life. Characters: Pappy Collins
Location: South Pacific and home front
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Taxi Garage Fight — A fight with the foreman leads to the mechanics being fired. Characters: Pappy Collins
Location: Taxi garage
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The Withheld Letter — The protagonist learns that Pappy withheld his college acceptance letter. Characters: Pappy Collins
Location: Home
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Last Minute Forgiveness — The protagonist forgives Pappy just before leaving for college. Characters: Pappy Collins
Location: Departure point
A Risky Campus Arrival
The protagonist reaches Bensonville, meets Elmer, and begins building a new life. Pappy's stolen-car stunt leads to an arrest and deepens the uncertainty surrounding college.
Key Events
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Cheap Boardinghouse — The protagonist arrives in Bensonville and discovers Elmer as his roommate. Characters: Elmer Hatch
Location: Bensonville boardinghouse
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A New Campus Friend — The protagonist becomes acquainted with Professor Shepherd and accepts a symbolic family role. Characters: Pappy Collins
Location: Bensonville
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Pappy Finds Work — Pappy appears in town after obtaining work as a car salesman. Characters: Pappy Collins
Location: Bensonville
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The Stolen Car Ride — Pappy gives the protagonist a stolen car, which is used to offer Connie a ride. Characters: Pappy Collins, Connie Harcourt
Location: Road to campus
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Arrest On Campus — A police officer arrests the protagonist, while Connie leaves without learning his name. Characters: Connie Harcourt
Location: Roadside and jailhouse
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Professor Secures Release — Professor Shepherd secures the protagonist's release because he owns the stolen car. Characters: Pappy Collins
Location: Jailhouse
The Kilroy Publicity Scheme
A missing half credit threatens admission until Pappy and Connie turn the Kilroy identity into a publicity campaign. The plan gains the protagonist entry into Benson and a place in Delta Omega.
Key Events
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Half Credit Denied — The registrar reveals that the protagonist lacks one-half credit for admission. Characters: Pappy Collins
Location: College registrar's office
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The Kilroy Publicity Plan — Pappy tells Connie that the protagonist is Kilroy and proposes using him to improve Benson's image. Characters: Pappy Collins, Connie Harcourt
Location: Benson campus
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Conditional Admission — Connie persuades the dean to let the protagonist make up the missing half credit. Characters: Connie Harcourt
Location: Dean Butler's office
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Kilroy Hits The Paper — Connie publishes a Kilroy story, while Elmer is present among the students who learn about it. Characters: Pappy Collins, Connie Harcourt, Elmer Hatch
Location: School newspaper office
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Fraternity Pledge — Delta Omega pledges the protagonist and offers him free housing. Characters: Pappy Collins, Elmer Hatch, Rodney Meadows
Location: Delta Omega fraternity house
Exposure And Social Cruelty
A newspaper photograph exposes the deception, and the protagonist denounces Pappy and Connie. Fraternity members then intensify their hostility through humiliating tasks and a deceptive dance invitation.
Key Events
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Pretender To Throne — A newspaper publishes the protagonist's photograph with the caption Pretender to Throne. Characters: Pappy Collins, Connie Harcourt
Location: Bensonville
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The Scheme Exposed — Pappy confesses the publicity ruse, and the protagonist denounces both collaborators. Characters: Pappy Collins, Connie Harcourt
Location: Bensonville
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Effigy In Flames — Students burn a Kilroy effigy as hostility toward the protagonist spreads. Characters: Pappy Collins, Connie Harcourt, Rodney Meadows
Location: Benson campus
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Fraternity Trials — Rodney leads exhausting tasks intended to force the protagonist out of the fraternity. Characters: Pappy Collins, Rodney Meadows
Location: Delta Omega fraternity house
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Pappy Forgiven — The protagonist forgives Pappy, although his conflict with Connie continues. Characters: Pappy Collins
Location: Bensonville
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The Pledge Dance Trap — Rodney's group invites the taxi drivers and then publicly denies knowing them. Characters: Pappy Collins, Rodney Meadows
Location: Fraternity pledge dance
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Brawl At The Dance — Pappy punches Rodney, and a brawl erupts after the fraternity's deception is exposed. Characters: Pappy Collins, Rodney Meadows
Location: Fraternity pledge dance
Dignity Restored
The dance brawl results in suspension and the protagonist's decision to leave Benson. Pappy, Connie, and Elmer bring him to a lecture, where his words inspire the students to ask him to stay.
Key Events
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Suspension And Departure — The protagonist is suspended and decides to leave college permanently. Characters: Pappy Collins, Rodney Meadows
Location: Benson campus
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A Final Intervention — Pappy, Connie, and Elmer bring the protagonist to Professor Shepherd's lecture and urge him to talk. Characters: Pappy Collins, Connie Harcourt, Elmer Hatch
Location: Lecture hall
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Words Over The Loudspeaker — The student's heartfelt conversation is broadcast through the lecture hall and heard by the students. Characters: Pappy Collins, Connie Harcourt, Elmer Hatch
Location: Lecture hall
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Choosing To Stay — The students applaud and ask the protagonist to stay, restoring his dignity and commitment to Benson. Characters: Pappy Collins, Connie Harcourt, Elmer Hatch, Rodney Meadows
Location: Benson campus
"Kilroy Was Here" was a popular expression during World War II, but it's not much fun to John J. Kilroy, who has to try to live with all the jokes and wisecracks regarding his name.