Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Disjointed Vision
Rene presents her ambitious thesis film about seven girls joining the military, only to face immediate academic skepticism.
Key Events
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Rene's Thesis Concept — Rene develops a military ensemble thesis film.
Location: Ryerson University
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Initial Screening — Rene presents her disjointed draft to faculty.
Location: Ryerson University
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Cast Reduction Critique — Professor advises reducing the large cast. Characters: Second Professor
Location: Ryerson University
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Academic Offices — Series of university offices for film defense.
Location: Ryerson University
Academic Pushback
Professors and peers criticize the tonal inconsistency and suggest drastic structural changes like reducing the cast or altering the format.
Key Events
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Tonal Challenge Feedback — Peers criticize the inconsistent narrative tone.
Location: Ryerson University
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Philosophical Matching Suggestion — Instructor suggests philosophical character alignment. Characters: Second Professor
Location: Ryerson University
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Web Series Proposal — Academic recommends converting to a web series. Characters: Second Professor
Location: Ryerson University
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Thesis Film Footage — Raw footage from the original seven-girl story.
Location: Various
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Academic Offices — Series of university offices for film defense.
Location: Ryerson University
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Peer Condemnation — Peers collectively condemn the disjointed structure.
Location: Ryerson University
Desperate Reshoot
After deep reflection, Rene attempts to reunite the original cast to film missing scenes and salvage her artistic vision.
Key Events
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Creative Soul Searching — Rene reflects deeply on her artistic vision.
Location: Ryerson University
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Reshoot Planning — Rene plans to reunite the original cast.
Location: Ryerson University
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Shoot Day Arrival — Only one actress arrives for the reshoot.
Location: Film Set
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Thesis Film Footage — Raw footage from the original seven-girl story.
Location: Various
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Film Set Location — Physical location for the attempted reshoot.
Location: Film Set
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Director's Dilemma — Rene faces the reality of her flawed vision.
Location: Ryerson University
Cast Abandonment
Only one actress arrives to reveal the entire cast has quit, forcing Rene to film the departure and confront her project's fragility.
Key Events
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Shoot Day Arrival — Only one actress arrives for the reshoot.
Location: Film Set
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Cast Resignation Revelation — Actress reveals the entire cast has quit.
Location: Film Set
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Filming the Exit — Rene films the actress leaving the set.
Location: Film Set
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Film Set Location — Physical location for the attempted reshoot.
Location: Film Set
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Final Lock Picture Attempt — Rene attempts to assemble the final cut.
Location: Ryerson University
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Cinematic Abandonment — The project faces collapse after cast departure.
Location: Ryerson University
A film student at Ryerson University struggles to complete her thesis project.