Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Girl Who Rides
Jenny dreams of becoming a competitive show rider, but her father disapproves because of a past riding tragedy. Even after being sent to boarding school, she continues to ride whenever possible.
Key Events
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Dreams of Riding — Jenny dreams of becoming a competitive show rider, but her father disapproves after a fatal riding accident. Characters: Jenny
Location: Family home and riding grounds
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Foal Delivery — Jenny helps her neighbours deliver a foal, creating an important connection with the young horse. Characters: Jenny
Location: Neighboring farm
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Sent Away — Jenny is sent to boarding school in Melbourne in an attempt to end her riding ambitions. Characters: Jenny
Location: Road to boarding school
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Secret Riding — Despite boarding school, Jenny continues riding whenever she can. Characters: Jenny
Location: Melbourne riding grounds
Life at the Racetrack
At eighteen, Jenny begins working as a stable hand under McIntyre and meets Barry at her boarding house. She becomes increasingly troubled by the trainer's harsh treatment of horses.
Key Events
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Stable Job — At eighteen, Jenny becomes a stable hand working for trainer McIntyre. Characters: Jenny, McIntyre
Location: Caulfield racetrack stables
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Boarding House — Jenny rents a room in a boarding house and meets Barry, a university student and mechanic. Characters: Jenny, Barry
Location: Boarding house
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Harsh Stable Methods — Jenny becomes troubled by McIntyre's seemingly uncaring treatment of horses. Characters: Jenny, McIntyre
Location: Racetrack stables
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Saving the Old Dog — After the old stable dog is scheduled to be put down, Jenny adopts him. Characters: Jenny
Location: Stable yard
The Filly Returns
A chestnut filly arrives and Jenny realizes she is the foal she once helped deliver. Named Blue Fire Lady, the filly bonds with Jenny, who trains her for racing while beginning a romance with Barry.
Key Events
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The Chestnut Filly — A chestnut filly with a large blaze arrives at the stable and is recognized by Jenny. Characters: Jenny, McIntyre
Location: Racetrack stables
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Blue Fire Lady — The filly is named Blue Fire Lady and shows affection for Jenny despite hostility toward other stablehands. Characters: Jenny, McIntyre
Location: Racetrack stables
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Training the Filly — Jenny begins training Blue Fire Lady as both her rider and strapper. Characters: Jenny
Location: Training track
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Growing Romance — Jenny and Barry grow closer while sharing the boarding house. Characters: Jenny, Barry
Location: Boarding house
Victory at a Cost
Blue Fire Lady wins her first race after being whipped against Jenny's wishes, but the victory leaves her traumatized and injured. Jenny quits after confronting the stable's treatment of the horse.
Key Events
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First Race Disaster — McIntyre orders harsh whipping during Blue Fire Lady's first race, although the filly wins. Characters: Jenny, McIntyre
Location: Racetrack
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Injured Winner — Blue Fire Lady is traumatized and injured after the race. Characters: Jenny
Location: Racetrack stable
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Jenny Quits — Jenny leaves her job after rejecting the stable's treatment of Blue Fire Lady. Characters: Jenny, McIntyre
Location: Racetrack stables
The Horse Is Saved
Jenny learns that Blue Fire Lady will be auctioned and loses her bid to a buyer seeking horses for dog food. Barry appeals to Jenny's estranged father, who buys the filly and helps Jenny achieve a final show-jumping victory.
Key Events
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Auction Threat — Jenny learns that Blue Fire Lady is considered unmanageable and will be sent to auction. Characters: Jenny
Location: Boarding house
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The Losing Bid — Jenny bids one hundred dollars but is outbid by a buyer seeking horses for dog food. Characters: Jenny
Location: Horse auction
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Barry's Appeal — Barry visits Jenny's estranged father and asks him to understand Jenny's devotion to horses. Characters: Barry
Location: Rural home
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A Father's Gift — Jenny discovers that her father bought Blue Fire Lady and apologizes for failing to understand her passion. Characters: Jenny, Barry
Location: Auction yard
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Show Jumping Victory — Jenny wins a show-jumping round with Blue Fire Lady while Barry and her proud father watch. Characters: Jenny, Barry
Location: Show-jumping arena