Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Debt Forces A Family
David is robbed and pressured by Brad to transport marijuana from Mexico. To avoid suspicion at the border, he assembles a fake family from people around him.
Key Events
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David Is Robbed — David loses the money and marijuana he owes after being robbed. Characters: David Clark
Location: Denver
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Debt Comes Due — Brad forces David to clear his debt by smuggling marijuana. Characters: David Clark, Brad Gurdlinger
Location: Denver
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The Millers Assemble — David recruits neighbors to pose as a family for border travel. Characters: David Clark
Location: David's neighborhood
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Mexico Smuggling Deal — David receives the shipment Brad described as a small amount. Characters: David Clark, Brad Gurdlinger
Location: Mexico
A Shipment Too Large
The group discovers that the shipment is two tons, far beyond David's expectation. Border stops and an overloaded RV make the return journey increasingly dangerous.
Key Events
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Mexico Smuggling Deal — David receives the shipment Brad described as a small amount. Characters: David Clark, Brad Gurdlinger
Location: Mexico
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The Shipment Is Massive — The group discovers the shipment is two tons rather than a small load. Characters: David Clark
Location: Cartel compound
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First Border Stop — Authorities stop the RV, but the group gets through by bribery and luck. Characters: David Clark
Location: Border checkpoint
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Second Border Stop — A second inspection threatens the shipment before the group escapes scrutiny. Characters: David Clark
Location: Border checkpoint
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Radiator Hose Breaks — The overloaded RV breaks down because of a damaged radiator hose. Characters: David Clark
Location: Highway
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Unexpected Tow — Another vacationing RV family catches up and tows the Millers to a repair shop. Characters: David Clark
Location: Highway
Cartel Pursuit
The RV breaks down and the group learns that a DEA agent is nearby. Pablo and One-Eye then confront them over the stolen marijuana, forcing a desperate escape.
Key Events
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The DEA Connection — David learns that the helpful father is a DEA agent. Characters: David Clark
Location: Tow vehicle
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Kissing Lesson — David films a kissing lesson intended to help the inexperienced teenager. Characters: David Clark
Location: RV
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Pablo's Trap — Pablo and One-Eye wait at the shop because the shipment was stolen from Pablo. Characters: David Clark, Pablo Chacon, One-Eye
Location: Repair shop
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Steam Vent Escape — The group distracts Pablo and escapes in the RV while One-Eye supports him. Characters: David Clark, Pablo Chacon, One-Eye
Location: Repair shop
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RV Crash — Erratic driving sends the RV off the highway and into a crash. Characters: David Clark
Location: Highway
Family Comes Apart
A crash and hospitalization delay the delivery. David's admission about the payment exposes his dishonesty and causes the temporary breakup of the group.
Key Events
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Tarantula Bite — A tarantula bites a passenger, requiring hospitalization and delaying delivery. Characters: David Clark
Location: Crashed RV
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The Fee Renegotiation — David renegotiates with Brad for a five-hundred-thousand-dollar fee. Characters: David Clark, Brad Gurdlinger
Location: Telephone negotiation
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The Money Argument — David accidentally reveals the unequal payment arrangement, causing the group to leave him. Characters: David Clark
Location: Carnival
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David Returns — David regrets abandoning the group, returns, and apologizes for hiding the truth. Characters: David Clark
Location: Carnival
Fireworks And Justice
David apologizes and reunites with the group before the final confrontation with One-Eye and Pablo. David's tip results in Brad's arrest, and the group enters witness protection together.
Key Events
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One-Eye Attacks — One-Eye finds the group and is stopped before he can shoot them. Characters: David Clark, One-Eye
Location: Campground
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Pablo Is Subdued — Fireworks distract Pablo, allowing David and another passenger to subdue him. Characters: David Clark, Pablo Chacon
Location: Campground
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Brad Is Arrested — David delivers the marijuana while DEA agents arrest Brad after receiving David's tip. Characters: David Clark, Brad Gurdlinger
Location: Delivery location
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Witness Protection — The group enters witness protection and lives together in a suburban house. Characters: David Clark
Location: Suburban house