Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Club Under Pressure
Blade runs a nightclub in early 1980s Australia. Random breath testing changes customer behavior, weakens alcohol sales, and threatens his livelihood.
Key Events
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Early 1980s Australia — The story is set in early 1980s Australia. Characters: Blade
Location: Australia
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Nightclub Business — Blade operates a larrikin nightclub and sells alcohol. Characters: Blade
Location: Blade's nightclub
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Blade and His Girlfriend — Blade is connected to the nightclub through his barmaid girlfriend. Characters: Blade
Location: Blade's nightclub
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Breath Testing Begins — Random breath testing has been introduced two months earlier. Characters: Blade
Location: Australia
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Customers Stop Driving — Customers avoid buying alcohol because they fear driving under the influence. Characters: Blade
Location: Blade's nightclub
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Business Declines — The nightclub's alcohol sales decline after breath testing begins. Characters: Blade
Location: Blade's nightclub
The Carpark Economy
Customers avoid buying grog because they fear driving under the influence. Instead, they go to the carpark to smoke dope, worsening Blade's financial decline.
Key Events
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Business Declines — The nightclub's alcohol sales decline after breath testing begins. Characters: Blade
Location: Blade's nightclub
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Dope in the Carpark — Customers go to the carpark to smoke dope instead of buying grog. Characters: Blade
Location: Nightclub carpark
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Blade Faces Bankruptcy — Blade realizes that the declining trade is driving him broke. Characters: Blade
Location: Blade's nightclub
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A Business Strategy — Blade decides that he needs a strategy to escape his financial problem. Characters: Blade
Location: Blade's nightclub
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Growing Dope — Blade chooses growing dope as a way out of his financial hole. Characters: Blade
Location: Blade's nightclub
A Risky Business Solution
Blade realizes he is going broke and decides he needs a new strategy. He chooses to grow dope as a way out of his financial hole.
Key Events
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A Business Strategy — Blade decides that he needs a strategy to escape his financial problem. Characters: Blade
Location: Blade's nightclub
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Growing Dope — Blade chooses growing dope as a way out of his financial hole. Characters: Blade
Location: Blade's nightclub
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The Crop Plan — The proposed solution shifts Blade's business effort toward a crop. Characters: Blade
Location: Australia
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Rural Property Chosen — The crop is to be grown on property owned by his girlfriend's father. Characters: Blade
Location: Girlfriend's father's property
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Crop Cultivation Begins — Blade begins the plan to grow a crop on the property. Characters: Blade
Location: Girlfriend's father's property
The Crop Becomes a Trap
The crop is planned for property owned by Blade's girlfriend's father. The plan soon catches Blade in a bind involving crooked cops and a ruthless moneylender.
Key Events
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Crop Cultivation Begins — Blade begins the plan to grow a crop on the property. Characters: Blade
Location: Girlfriend's father's property
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The Plan Unravels — The cultivation plan soon places Blade in a dangerous bind. Characters: Blade
Location: Girlfriend's father's property
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Crooked Police Pressure — Crooked cops become one side of the pressure surrounding the crop. Characters: Blade
Location: Girlfriend's father's property
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Moneylender Appears — A ruthless moneylender becomes another force threatening Blade's situation. Characters: Blade
Location: Australia
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Pressure Closes In — Blade is caught between crooked police and a ruthless moneylender. Characters: Blade
Location: Girlfriend's father's property
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Financial Escape Blocked — The crop no longer offers a simple escape from Blade's financial hole. Characters: Blade
Location: Girlfriend's father's property
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Criminal Bind Intensifies — The competing pressures turn Blade's business strategy into a criminal bind. Characters: Blade
Location: Girlfriend's father's property
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Blade's Predicament — Blade's attempt to recover financially leaves him trapped between dangerous forces. Characters: Blade
Location: Australia