Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Amazon at Work
A.B. runs the company with masculine manners, clothing, and hairstyle. Although professionally capable, she is unhappy with this role.
Key Events
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A.B. Runs the Company — A.B. runs the company for T.M. Bancroft and its male board of directors. Characters: T.M. Bancroft
Location: Bancroft company
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Masculine Business Persona — A.B. uses masculine manners, clothes, and hairstyle while managing business affairs.
Location: Bancroft company
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A.B. Feels Unhappy — Despite her professional authority, A.B. is unhappy with her current identity.
Location: Bancroft company
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Retreat at Bancroft Estate — The business group gathers at a retreat involving the Bancroft family. Characters: T.M. Bancroft, Grandma Bancroft
Location: Business retreat
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The Amazon Remark — A.B. overhears the boss's son call her an Amazon.
Location: Business retreat
Grandma's Feminine Lesson
After overhearing the Amazon remark, A.B. accepts Grandma Bancroft's makeover. Grandma changes her appearance and teaches her a performative style of flirtation.
Key Events
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The Amazon Remark — A.B. overhears the boss's son call her an Amazon.
Location: Business retreat
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Grandma Offers Guidance — Grandma Bancroft offers to transform A.B. into a more conventionally feminine woman. Characters: Grandma Bancroft
Location: Bancroft retreat
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Eyebrows Are Plucked — Grandma Bancroft plucks A.B.'s eyebrows as part of the makeover. Characters: Grandma Bancroft
Location: Bancroft retreat
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Hair Is Curled — Grandma Bancroft curls A.B.'s hair and changes her appearance. Characters: Grandma Bancroft
Location: Bancroft retreat
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The Clinging Vine Lesson — Grandma teaches A.B. that men supposedly want a clinging vine rather than brains. Characters: Grandma Bancroft
Location: Bancroft retreat
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Two Flirtatious Phrases — Grandma instructs A.B. to say, "Do go on!" and "Aren't you wonderful!" Characters: Grandma Bancroft
Location: Bancroft retreat
The Clinging Vine Appears
A.B. appears before the guests in a highly decorated white outfit, and the men become smitten. She decides that she wants to marry the boss's son.
Key Events
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The White Ruffled Outfit — A.B. appears before Grandma's guests in an exaggerated white outfit covered with ruffles and bows. Characters: Grandma Bancroft
Location: Bancroft retreat
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Guests Become Smitten — The men at the gathering become smitten with A.B.'s new feminine persona. Characters: Grandma Bancroft
Location: Bancroft retreat
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Marriage Decision — A.B. decides that she wants to marry the boss's son.
Location: Bancroft retreat
Brains Defeat the Con
A con man threatens the men and the company. A.B. uses her intelligence to save them and prevent the company from falling into ruin.
Key Events
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A Con Man Arrives — A con man threatens the men and the company's security. Characters: T.M. Bancroft
Location: Bancroft company
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A.B. Detects the Scheme — A.B. uses her judgment to recognize and oppose the con man's scheme. Characters: T.M. Bancroft
Location: Bancroft company
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The Men Are Saved — A.B. saves the men and the boss's son from the con man. Characters: T.M. Bancroft
Location: Bancroft company
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The Company Is Rescued — A.B. saves the company from ruin through her business ability. Characters: T.M. Bancroft
Location: Bancroft company
A Balanced Identity
A.B. combines her business competence with the feminine style expected by the men. The final compliment and kiss confirm the romantic resolution.
Key Events
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Brains and Charm Combined — A.B. combines her former business persona with the flirtatious feminine ideal taught by Grandma. Characters: T.M. Bancroft, Grandma Bancroft
Location: Bancroft social setting
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A Compliment Is Given — The boss's son tells A.B., "I think you're wonderful."
Location: Bancroft social setting
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The Final Kiss — A.B. replies, "Oh, do go on!" and kisses the boss's son.
Location: Bancroft social setting