Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Manufactured Persona
Aubrey works as a railroad clerk but presents himself as an important executive. His boastful performance leads to marriage despite the family's contempt.
Key Events
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Railroad Office Clerkship — Aubrey works as a clerk at the Pennsylvania Railroad offices. Characters: Aubrey Piper
Location: Pennsylvania Railroad offices
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Executive Pretension — Aubrey poses as an important executive to impress his sweetheart. Characters: Aubrey Piper
Location: Pennsylvania Railroad offices
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Endless Showing Off — Aubrey repeatedly blusters and postures to maintain his invented image. Characters: Aubrey Piper
Location: Unknown social setting
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Marriage Despite Doubts — Aubrey marries despite contempt from the surrounding family. Characters: Aubrey Piper
Location: Unknown
A Family's Financial Gamble
Aubrey's faults become clear after marriage. Pop Fisher commits the mortgage savings to a rust-preventing paint invention and then dies of a stroke.
Key Events
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Marriage Despite Doubts — Aubrey marries despite contempt from the surrounding family. Characters: Aubrey Piper
Location: Unknown
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Faults Become Clear — Three months later, Aubrey's faults are fully recognized. Characters: Aubrey Piper
Location: Fisher family home
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Mortgage Savings Given — Pop Fisher gives the money saved for the mortgage toward an invention. Characters: Pop Fisher
Location: Fisher family home
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Rust Preventing Paint — The invention at the center of the family's financial gamble is rust-preventing paint. Characters: Pop Fisher
Location: Fisher family home
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Sudden Death — Pop Fisher dies of a stroke shortly after giving away the mortgage savings. Characters: Pop Fisher
Location: Fisher family home
The Automobile Disaster
Aubrey wins a Ford but immediately turns the prize into a crisis by hitting a traffic policeman. His arrest consumes the money intended to protect the home.
Key Events
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Sudden Death — Pop Fisher dies of a stroke shortly after giving away the mortgage savings. Characters: Pop Fisher
Location: Fisher family home
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Raffle Prize Won — Aubrey wins a Ford in a raffle. Characters: Aubrey Piper
Location: Unknown raffle venue
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Broad Street Drive — Aubrey takes the Ford out for a drive on Broad Street. Characters: Aubrey Piper
Location: Broad Street
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Traffic Collision — Aubrey knocks down a traffic policeman while driving the prize car. Characters: Aubrey Piper
Location: Broad Street
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Aubrey Arrested — Aubrey is arrested after the traffic collision. Characters: Aubrey Piper
Location: Unknown police setting
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Mortgage Money Spent — The remaining mortgage money is used to pay Aubrey's fine. Characters: Aubrey Piper
Location: Unknown legal setting
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Marriage Plans Collapse — Clara sadly realizes that marriage plans can no longer proceed. Characters: Clara
Location: Fisher family home
The Last-Minute Bluff
With the home endangered and marriage plans collapsing, Aubrey visits a steel company. He bluffs the directors into buying the invention.
Key Events
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Marriage Plans Collapse — Clara sadly realizes that marriage plans can no longer proceed. Characters: Clara
Location: Fisher family home
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Home Faces Loss — The family home appears likely to be lost because the mortgage cannot be protected. Characters: Clara
Location: Fisher family home
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Steel Company Visit — Aubrey visits steel company directors to present the invention. Characters: Aubrey Piper
Location: Steel company offices
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Bluffed Sale — By bluffing, Aubrey sells the invention to the steel company. Characters: Aubrey Piper
Location: Steel company offices
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Signed Contract And Check — Aubrey obtains a signed contract and a check for $50,000. Characters: Aubrey Piper
Location: Steel company offices
Foreclosure Averted
A bank representative prepares to secure the deed, but Aubrey arrives with a signed contract and a $50,000 check. His risky behavior finally becomes an act of redemption.
Key Events
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Signed Contract And Check — Aubrey obtains a signed contract and a check for $50,000. Characters: Aubrey Piper
Location: Steel company offices
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Foreclosure Threat — A bank representative waits at the house and demands release of the deed.
Location: Fisher family home
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Doorway Intervention — Aubrey bursts through the door and stops the deed from being signed. Characters: Aubrey Piper
Location: Fisher family home
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Redemption Explained — Aubrey explains that his deal has saved the family from foreclosure. Characters: Aubrey Piper
Location: Fisher family home
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Triumphant Laughter — Aubrey pats a shoulder and laughs triumphantly as the crisis ends. Characters: Aubrey Piper
Location: Fisher family home
A blowhard who poses as a railroad executive (but is really just a $30-a-week clerk) catches a young bride and then drives her family's finances to the brink of ruin.