Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A House With History
David moves into a large house with Jessica and begins planning repairs and improvements. The septic project connects the property to memories of his father, while work and financial pressures already trouble him.
Key Events
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David Moves Into House — David moves into a large new house with help from his daughter Jessica. Characters: David Vanowen, Jessica Vanowen
Location: New house
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Septic System Needs Replacement — David learns that the property needs a replacement septic system. Characters: David Vanowen
Location: New house property
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David Claims The Project — David insists on installing the septic tank himself because it recalls a project shared with his father. Characters: David Vanowen
Location: New house property
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The Hidden Hundred Dollar Bill — David finds a hundred-dollar bill hidden near a closet and jokes that the house bought dinner. Characters: David Vanowen
Location: New house
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Plans For The Property — David discusses new furniture, a patio, grass, and gravel with Jessica and Mark. Characters: David Vanowen, Jessica Vanowen, Mark Armstrong
Location: New house
Pressure Beneath The Soil
David faces an accelerated work deadline while Mark observes his deteriorating condition. As landscaping work begins, David continues digging the septic area and uncovers a corpse with money.
Key Events
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Divorce And Financial Pressure — David struggles with divorce, financial concerns, and pressure from his job. Characters: David Vanowen
Location: New house
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Mr. Wu Advances The Deadline — Mr. Wu demands that David finish an important software update two days early. Characters: David Vanowen, Mr. Wu
Location: David's workplace
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Mark Notices David's Decline — Mark notices that David is distracted and barely eating despite David claiming to cope. Characters: David Vanowen, Mark Armstrong
Location: New house
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Landscaping Materials Arrive — Allen arranges delivery of dirt and gravel while David continues digging the septic area. Characters: David Vanowen, Allen Palms
Location: New house property
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The Buried Corpse — David discovers a corpse buried on his land while digging the septic area. Characters: David Vanowen, The Corpse
Location: Septic digging area
The Missing Burial
David fears that reporting the corpse will make him a suspect and seeks financial advice about the cash. After hiding the money, he discovers that the burial site has been disturbed and the corpse has disappeared.
Key Events
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The Buried Corpse — David discovers a corpse buried on his land while digging the septic area. Characters: David Vanowen, The Corpse
Location: Septic digging area
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Money Beneath The Property — David finds a large amount of money with the buried corpse. Characters: David Vanowen, The Corpse
Location: Septic digging area
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David Fears Reporting It — David considers reporting the discovery but fears authorities may suspect him. Characters: David Vanowen
Location: New house
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Bank Officer Gives Warning — The Bank Officer warns that a large deposit could attract Treasury and IRS attention. Characters: David Vanowen, Bank Officer
Location: Bank
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David Hides The Cash — After receiving financial advice, David hides the cash rather than openly depositing it. Characters: David Vanowen
Location: New house
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The Burial Site Is Disturbed — David repeatedly checks the burial site and finds that the ground has been disturbed. Characters: David Vanowen, The Corpse
Location: Septic digging area
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The Corpse Disappears — The corpse is no longer where David left it, deepening his belief that someone is tormenting him. Characters: David Vanowen, The Corpse
Location: Septic digging area
Trust Collapses
David withdraws from work and interprets unexpected visits as threats. He attacks Allen, then violently confronts Mark, while Zack's introduction leaves the mystery and David's instability unresolved.
Key Events
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The Corpse Disappears — The corpse is no longer where David left it, deepening his belief that someone is tormenting him. Characters: David Vanowen, The Corpse
Location: Septic digging area
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David Stops Going To Work — David misses work and tells Whitney that he is sick and will work from home. Characters: David Vanowen, Whitney Reception
Location: New house
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David Attacks Allen — Allen unexpectedly appears, and David panics and attacks him. Characters: David Vanowen, Allen Palms
Location: New house property
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David Turns On Mark — David mistakes Mark for someone trying to steal the money and confronts him violently. Characters: David Vanowen, Mark Armstrong
Location: New house
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Zack Introduces Himself — Zack introduces himself as Jessica's boyfriend while David's unstable behavior remains unresolved. Characters: David Vanowen, Jessica Vanowen, Zack Kennedy
Location: New house
David Vanowen moves into a mysterious house and discovers a box buried in his backyard, filled with 3 million dollars and a fresh corpse. David hides the money in the house, only to be stalked by the buried body.