Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A House Without Rent
Lois and her widowed sister cannot pay their rent. They move into a house left by their uncle despite its haunted reputation.
Key Events
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Financial Hardship — Lois and her widowed sister have no money left to pay their rent. Characters: Lois Atwell
Location: The sisters' rented home
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Rent Becomes Impossible — Their lack of money forces the women to seek another place to live. Characters: Lois Atwell
Location: The sisters' rented home
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Inherited House Offered — The women decide to live in a house left to them by their uncle. Characters: Lois Atwell
Location: The uncle's house
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Haunted Reputation — The inherited house is known locally as haunted. Characters: Lois Atwell
Location: The uncle's house
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Move Into the House — Lois and her widowed sister go to live in the allegedly haunted house. Characters: Lois Atwell
Location: The haunted house
The Hazing Arrival
Ted is sent to spend the night in the haunted house as part of college hazing. His arrival places him in the same dangerous setting as Lois.
Key Events
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Move Into the House — Lois and her widowed sister go to live in the allegedly haunted house. Characters: Lois Atwell
Location: The haunted house
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Hazing Assignment — Ted is sent to spend the night in the haunted house as part of college hazing. Characters: Ted Rawson
Location: College
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Ted Approaches the House — Ted arrives at the house to complete the hazing challenge. Characters: Ted Rawson
Location: Outside the haunted house
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Nightfall at the House — The women and Ted are in the same house during the night. Characters: Lois Atwell, Ted Rawson
Location: The haunted house
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Breaking-In Sounds — The women hear someone breaking into the house. Characters: Lois Atwell, Ted Rawson
Location: Inside the haunted house
Gunpoint Misunderstanding
Sounds of breaking in cause Lois to mistake Ted for a burglar. She holds him captive with a gun while the real thief remains hidden.
Key Events
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Breaking-In Sounds — The women hear someone breaking into the house. Characters: Lois Atwell, Ted Rawson
Location: Inside the haunted house
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Ted Becomes Suspect — Lois assumes Ted is the person breaking into the house. Characters: Lois Atwell, Ted Rawson
Location: Inside the haunted house
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Gunpoint Confrontation — Lois holds Ted captive at gunpoint. Characters: Lois Atwell, Ted Rawson
Location: Inside the haunted house
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Ted Denies Burglary — Ted remains under suspicion while Lois waits for an explanation of his presence. Characters: Lois Atwell, Ted Rawson
Location: Inside the haunted house
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A Real Thief Hides — A real thief is also hiding inside the house. Characters: Lois Atwell, Ted Rawson
Location: Inside the haunted house
Ghostly Diversion
The women move through the house in white gowns. The real thief mistakes them for ghosts and leaves hastily.
Key Events
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A Real Thief Hides — A real thief is also hiding inside the house. Characters: Lois Atwell, Ted Rawson
Location: Inside the haunted house
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Women Search the House — The women trail through the house while the real thief remains hidden. Characters: Lois Atwell
Location: Inside the haunted house
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White Gowns Appear — The women move through the house in white gowns. Characters: Lois Atwell
Location: Inside the haunted house
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Thief Sees Apparitions — The hidden thief sees the women in white gowns and thinks they are ghosts. Characters: Lois Atwell
Location: Inside the haunted house
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Thief Flees Hastily — Believing the women are ghosts, the real thief departs hastily. Characters: Lois Atwell
Location: The haunted house
The Real Criminal Revealed
Lois continues to treat Ted as a housebreaker until he explains his presence. The police catch the actual criminal and resolve the misunderstanding.
Key Events
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Thief Flees Hastily — Believing the women are ghosts, the real thief departs hastily. Characters: Lois Atwell
Location: The haunted house
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Lois Questions Ted — Lois doubts Ted is a real housebreaker but still treats him as one. Characters: Lois Atwell, Ted Rawson
Location: Inside the haunted house
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Ted Explains Himself — Ted can explain why he was in the house as part of a college hazing. Characters: Lois Atwell, Ted Rawson
Location: Inside the haunted house
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Police Catch the Thief — The police catch the actual criminal, confirming Ted was not the housebreaker. Characters: Lois Atwell, Ted Rawson
Location: The haunted house
The old Atwell home is said to be haunted, and Jeremy Foster, the gardener--who is actually the head of a band of thieves that use the house for a hideout--does his best to keep the superstition alive. Despite the rumors, impoverished sisters Lois and Alice Atwell decide to move into the empty family home. They take possession the same night that Ted Rawson is ordered to explore the place as an initiation rite by his fraternity.