Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Dispute Before the Danger
Prayers open the story before it shifts back one week. Shane's argument with a partner exposes tensions over the family party, school, money, and trust.
Key Events
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Prayers for Prosperity — Prayers for peace, holiness, happiness, and prosperity open the story.
Location: Unspecified
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One Week Earlier — The story shifts back one week to establish the earlier conflict. Characters: Shane
Location: Unspecified
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Family Party Argument — Shane argues with a partner about getting ready for a family party. Characters: Shane
Location: Unspecified
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School Plans Revealed — The partner reveals plans to return to school, worsening the argument. Characters: Shane
Location: Unspecified
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Resentments Surface — The dispute exposes resentment about money, family, and trust. Characters: Shane
Location: Unspecified
Lulu at the Remote House
Lulu arrives after driving through the night with an injured ankle and is taken inside. Armed people arrive, the telephone line is found cut, and Dylan helps her escape gunfire.
Key Events
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Lulu Reaches the House — Lulu arrives at a remote house in costume after driving through the night. Characters: Lulu
Location: Remote house
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Injured Ankle — Lulu arrives with an injured ankle after running. Characters: Lulu
Location: Remote house
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Offered Treatment — A man takes Lulu inside and offers to treat her injury. Characters: Lulu
Location: Inside the remote house
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Armed Arrival — Armed people arrive, making the situation inside the house dangerous. Characters: Lulu, Dylan, Neil, Snack, Chad
Location: Remote house
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Cut Telephone Line — The occupants discover that the telephone line has been cut. Characters: Lulu, Dylan
Location: Remote house
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Dylan's Background — Dylan says he manages production at a brick factory, not that he is an ex-soldier. Characters: Dylan, Lulu
Location: Remote house
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Escape from Gunfire — Dylan helps Lulu escape the gunfire as the occupants face the attackers. Characters: Dylan, Lulu
Location: Remote house
A House Prepared to Resist
The pursuers discuss their earlier scheme, the evidence connected to the house, and whether to wait or attack. Dylan describes the house's defenses as the occupants use them to resist.
Key Events
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Escape from Gunfire — Dylan helps Lulu escape the gunfire as the occupants face the attackers. Characters: Dylan, Lulu
Location: Remote house
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Pursuit Debated — The pursuers debate whether to wait until dark or attack immediately. Characters: Neil, Snack, Chad
Location: Outside the remote house
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Earlier Scheme Discussed — Their conversations connect the operation to an earlier scheme and evidence at the house. Characters: Neil, Snack, Chad
Location: Outside the remote house
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House Defenses Explained — Dylan explains the house's preparations for possible zombie chaos. Characters: Dylan, Lulu
Location: Inside the remote house
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Defense Against Attack — The occupants use the house's defenses to resist the attackers. Characters: Lulu, Dylan, Neil, Snack, Chad
Location: Remote house
Family Ties and an Unresolved Demand
The conflict turns more personal when the attackers bring Shane's relationship with Lulu into their plan. After a violent assault, Neil is apparently killed and Dylan is badly wounded; the final confrontation reveals Chad as Lulu's uncle and ends with a large payment demand.
Key Events
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Shane Used in the Plan — The attackers discuss Shane and use his relationship with Lulu as part of their plan. Characters: Shane, Lulu, Chad, Neil, Snack
Location: Unspecified
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Pressure Plate Assault — Threats, beatings, gunfire, and a pressure-plate trap mark a violent assault. Characters: Lulu, Dylan, Neil, Snack, Chad
Location: Remote house
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Neil Apparently Killed — Neil is apparently killed during the assault. Characters: Neil, Lulu, Dylan
Location: Remote house
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Wounded and Low on Ammunition — Dylan is badly wounded and the group runs short of ammunition. Characters: Lulu, Dylan
Location: Inside the remote house
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Survivors Move Through House — Lulu and the survivors keep moving through the house and try to protect one another. Characters: Lulu, Dylan
Location: Inside the remote house
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Hostage Threatened — In the final confrontation, a hostage is threatened with a knife. Characters: Lulu, Chad, Snack
Location: Remote house
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Uncle Revealed — Chad identifies himself to Lulu as her uncle. Characters: Lulu, Chad
Location: Remote house
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Payment Demand — The attackers demand a large payment, leaving the struggle unresolved. Characters: Lulu, Chad, Snack
Location: Remote house