Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Fractured Household
A young couple argues about their relationship, family introductions, and a possible move to Stanford. Evan is also left out when he asks the adults to play.
Key Events
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Relationship Dispute — A young couple argues about their future and one partner's exclusion from his family life. Characters: Tina
Location: Unspecified
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Dangerous Grandfather — The young man resists introducing his partner to Leroy, whom he describes as dangerous. Characters: Tina
Location: Unspecified
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Stanford Disagreement — A possible move to Stanford deepens the couple's frustration, but they stay together. Characters: Tina
Location: Unspecified
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Evan Wants to Play — Evan asks the adults to play hide-and-seek and is left out of their plans. Characters: Evan
Location: Family home
Leroy's Haunted Past
Household disputes give way to Leroy's painful Vietnam memories. He rejects encouragement to forgive himself, drinks, and increasingly confuses play with military danger.
Key Events
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Household Tensions — Arguments at home concern money, living conditions, and the young man's relationship with Tina. Characters: Tina
Location: Family home
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War Memories Resurface — Leroy is haunted by memories of Vietnam and the killing of wounded children. Characters: Leroy
Location: Unspecified
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Rejected Forgiveness — A friend urges Leroy to forgive himself, but Leroy rejects the advice and drinks. Characters: Leroy
Location: Unspecified
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Play Becomes Military — Leroy treats play as a military operation and speaks as though enemies are nearby. Characters: Leroy, Evan
Location: Family home
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Evan Is Frightened — Evan is repeatedly brushed aside and left frightened by the adults' behavior. Characters: Evan, Leroy
Location: Family home
The House Turns Hostile
Tina and her boyfriend's friends arrive, and Leroy views them as threats. The young people try to manage him and keep Evan safe as hide-and-seek becomes frightening.
Key Events
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Visitors Arrive — Tina and her boyfriend's friends arrive as Leroy's behavior becomes increasingly alarming. Characters: Tina, Leroy
Location: Family home
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Visitors Seen as Threats — Leroy regards the visitors as threats while the young people try to manage him and protect Evan. Characters: Tina, Leroy, Evan
Location: Family home
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Hide and Seek Turns Dark — The game becomes frightening as Leroy searches the house and others attempt to hide or escape. Characters: Tina, Leroy, Evan
Location: Family home
Flight and Uncertainty
The group finds a seriously injured person and debates whether to flee. A friend falls from a window, and the aftermath leaves Tina's fate unresolved.
Key Events
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Injured Person Found — The group discovers a seriously injured person and argues about staying or fleeing. Characters: Tina, Leroy, Evan
Location: Family home
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Fall from the Window — One of the friends falls from a window as the survivors struggle to get away. Characters: Tina, Evan, Leroy
Location: Family home, near a window
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Tina's Fate Unconfirmed — The young man asks where Tina is and learns that a friend fell; Tina's fate remains unconfirmed. Characters: Tina, Evan
Location: Aftermath of the confrontation