Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Town Under Scrutiny
George guides newspapermen through Tangleton, and their article exposes the contrast between wealthy and overcrowded housing. The town leaders respond by ordering a public opinion survey.
Key Events
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Newspaper Assignment — Two newspapermen are assigned to write about town planning in Tangleton. Characters: George Gribble
Location: Newspaper office
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Arrival in Tangleton — The newspapermen arrive and find George as the only worker at the town hall. Characters: George Gribble
Location: Tangleton town hall
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Guided Town Tour — George gives the newspapermen a guided tour of the industrial town. Characters: George Gribble
Location: Tangleton
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Negative Newspaper Article — The article contrasts Oxbold's giant house with George's overcrowded slum home. Characters: George Gribble
Location: Newspaper office
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Survey Assignment — George is ordered to investigate public opinion after the article angers town leaders. Characters: George Gribble
Location: Tangleton council offices
The Dangerous Survey
George interviews the entire population rather than a limited sample. The results reveal deep dissatisfaction, prompting an attempt to suppress unfavorable forms.
Key Events
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Whole Town Poll — Instead of sampling residents, George interviews the entire town population. Characters: George Gribble
Location: Tangleton streets
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Unhappy Public Opinion — The survey reveals widespread dissatisfaction with housing and local services. Characters: George Gribble
Location: Tangleton council offices
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Forms Marked For Destruction — George is ordered to burn unfavorable forms while only favorable forms are sent to London. Characters: George Gribble
Location: Council offices
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Salvage Instead Of Burning — George puts the unwanted forms out for salvage because he does not want to waste paper. Characters: George Gribble
Location: Tangleton streets
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Payment Delayed — George needs his promised payment to repay a loan shark but is told the survey is incomplete. Characters: George Gribble
Location: Tangleton
Forms On The Run
George struggles to obtain payment and Strawbridge's response. A road sweeper mishap releases the suppressed forms, turning a bureaucratic problem into a public scandal.
Key Events
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Strawbridge Recruitment Plan — The unpopular leader seeks Strawbridge as a council candidate to improve the council's standing. Characters: George Gribble
Location: Council offices
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Butler Blocks The Survey — George cannot pass the Butler's door to obtain Strawbridge's opinion. Characters: George Gribble, Butler, Sir Timothy Strawbridge
Location: Strawbridge's house
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Road Sweeper Mishap — George meets Strawbridge by chance, and a mishap sends them careering through town on a road sweeper. Characters: George Gribble, Sir Timothy Strawbridge
Location: Tangleton streets
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Forms Released In Street — George accidentally presses a button, releasing the unfavorable forms through the streets. Characters: George Gribble, Sir Timothy Strawbridge
Location: Tangleton streets
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Shelter At Strawbridge House — George and Strawbridge shelter in the house while avoiding pursuit after the forms are scattered. Characters: George Gribble, Sir Timothy Strawbridge, Butler
Location: Strawbridge's house
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Survey Form Completed — George finally persuades Strawbridge to complete the missing survey form. Characters: George Gribble, Sir Timothy Strawbridge
Location: Strawbridge's house
The Evidence Survives
George is dismissed and attacked by mounting pressures, but he enters the council campaign. A desperate attempt to recover the forms ends with Strawbridge preserving the evidence electronically.
Key Events
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George Is Dismissed — George is sacked after his employers learn that he guided the newspapermen around town. Characters: George Gribble
Location: Council offices
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Council Election Campaign — George runs for the council on a town planning platform with newspaper support. Characters: George Gribble
Location: Tangleton
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Race For The Forms — After bailiffs seize his furniture and the vase containing the forms, George races to recover the evidence. Characters: George Gribble
Location: Tangleton streets
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Evidence At Conference — Strawbridge's electronic recording preserves the evidence, exposing the crooked councillors and vindicating George. Characters: George Gribble, Sir Timothy Strawbridge
Location: Town planning conference