Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Startup Built on a Pitch
Will seeks entry into the startup world and decides to persuade Bruce to fund a company that does not yet exist. Glenn joins him in presenting a biotech concept whose demonstration must convince Bruce.
Key Events
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Everyday Life Fragments — Disconnected glimpses show people discussing sports, podcasts, work, and technology.
Location: Unspecified
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Will Seeks a Startup Opening — Will looks for a way into the startup world. Characters: Will Kerrigan
Location: Unspecified
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A Company Invented After Funding — Will reasons that Bruce invests in people, so the company can be invented later. Characters: Will Kerrigan
Location: Unspecified
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Glenn Joins the Scheme — Will and Glenn become involved in a plan to secure Bruce's investment. Characters: Will Kerrigan, Glenn Marnell
Location: Unspecified
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The Biotech Concept — They present a concept about the human body as extraordinary technology awaiting a handbook. Characters: Will Kerrigan, Glenn Marnell
Location: Unspecified
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The Demo Must Convince — Their plan depends on persuading Bruce that the demonstration is real. Characters: Will Kerrigan, Glenn Marnell
Location: Unspecified
Investment with Conditions
Will and Glenn approach Bruce, who offers to double the requested investment if the demo works. Carla urges due diligence, while the triggered security system at Bruce's house threatens to expose the scheme.
Key Events
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The Demo Must Convince — Their plan depends on persuading Bruce that the demonstration is real. Characters: Will Kerrigan, Glenn Marnell
Location: Unspecified
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Meeting with Bruce — Will and Glenn approach Bruce through a meeting and discuss a major investment. Characters: Will Kerrigan, Glenn Marnell, Bruce Marcus
Location: Unspecified meeting place
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Bruce Raises the Offer — Bruce offers to double the requested amount at the same valuation if the demo works. Characters: Will Kerrigan, Glenn Marnell, Bruce Marcus
Location: Unspecified
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Carla Urges Due Diligence — Carla cautions Bruce and urges due diligence, but he dismisses her concerns. Characters: Carla Flores, Bruce Marcus
Location: Unspecified
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Security System Triggers — Glenn's intrusion-detection system is triggered, leaving him inside Bruce's house and risking exposure. Characters: Will Kerrigan, Glenn Marnell
Location: Bruce's house
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Will Refuses to Abandon the Demo — Will insists they cannot abandon the presentation scheduled for the next morning. Characters: Will Kerrigan, Glenn Marnell
Location: Unspecified
Trust Under Arrest
Glenn is arrested, and Will asks him to stay in custody while Will attempts the demo alone. Glenn objects that they trusted each other and should get out together; Will apologizes but does not abandon the plan.
Key Events
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Will Refuses to Abandon the Demo — Will insists they cannot abandon the presentation scheduled for the next morning. Characters: Will Kerrigan, Glenn Marnell
Location: Unspecified
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Glenn Is Arrested — Glenn is arrested, further disrupting their plan. Characters: Will Kerrigan, Glenn Marnell
Location: Unspecified
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Will Asks Glenn to Stay — Will asks Glenn to remain in custody while he attempts the demonstration alone. Characters: Will Kerrigan, Glenn Marnell
Location: Custody
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Glenn Calls Out the Betrayal — Glenn says they trusted Will and insists they should get out together; Will apologizes but persists. Characters: Will Kerrigan, Glenn Marnell
Location: Custody
The Past and an Unfinished Future
Will recounts Glenn's hacking, the harassment that followed, and how he helped Glenn afterward. Bruce's conference demands and Will's admission about his connection to Bruce leave the scam's consequences and the pair's next move unresolved.
Key Events
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Glenn's Hacking Past Revealed — Will recounts Glenn's teenage Lucasfilm hack and the harassment that followed. Characters: Will Kerrigan, Glenn Marnell
Location: Unspecified
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Will Describes Their Shared Past — Will says Glenn moved in with him after the harassment and that he dropped out of school to help. Characters: Will Kerrigan, Glenn Marnell
Location: Unspecified
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Conference Demands — Bruce expects Glenn to attend in person and handle security despite Glenn's difficulty with crowds. Characters: Will Kerrigan, Glenn Marnell, Bruce Marcus
Location: Tech Elite conference
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The Next Move Remains Unresolved — Will acknowledges using a connection close to Bruce; the scam's consequences and their next move remain unresolved. Characters: Will Kerrigan, Glenn Marnell, Bruce Marcus
Location: Unspecified