Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A New Town and a Hidden Mission
Graham moves with Jim, who struggles with leaving his old life behind. Jim discovers Graham's connection to a secret space programme and learns that a catastrophe has led Graham to abandon his mission.
Key Events
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Moving Day — Graham packs the family belongings and moves with Jim to a new town. Characters: Jim, Graham
Location: Family home
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Leaving Friends Behind — Jim is unhappy about leaving his friends and school behind. Characters: Jim, Graham
Location: New town
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Graham Offers Reassurance — Graham tries to reassure Jim that the move will be all right. Characters: Graham, Jim
Location: New town
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Secret Space Programme — Jim discovers that Graham is connected to a secret space programme. Characters: Jim, Graham
Location: New town
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Abandoned Mission — A catastrophe has shaken the programme, and Graham has decided to abandon his mission. Characters: Graham
Location: Space programme
The Balloon Takes Shape
Jim frames his new life as a mission and meets Emma at school. They become partners and choose a high-altitude balloon project despite others viewing it as dangerous and unrealistic.
Key Events
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Jim's New Mission — Fascinated by space and distance, Jim treats his new life as a mission. Characters: Jim
Location: New town
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Meeting Emma — Jim meets Emma at school, where they become science contest partners. Characters: Jim, Emma
Location: School
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Balloon Project Chosen — Jim and Emma decide to recreate the balloon used in Kittinger's Excelsior project. Characters: Jim, Emma
Location: School
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A Risky Proposal — Their idea is considered dangerous and unrealistic beside safer student inventions. Characters: Jim, Emma
Location: School
Secret Tests and Unspoken Troubles
Jim and Emma build the balloon, study flight conditions and safety, and carry out a test flight. Emma gradually recognizes that Jim is concealing serious problems at home.
Key Events
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Secret Construction — Jim and Emma secretly build their balloon using Graham's old equipment. Characters: Jim, Emma
Location: Workshop
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Planning Flight Safety — They study altitude, temperature, flight duration, and safety procedures. Characters: Jim, Emma
Location: Workshop
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Test Flight — They carry out a test flight and pretend to be pilots. Characters: Jim, Emma
Location: Test flight site
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Emma Notices Jim's Troubles — Emma realizes Jim is hiding serious problems at home. Characters: Jim, Emma
Location: School
Contest-Day Crisis
Graham discovers Jim is missing and searches the school grounds. Emma appears in flight gear near a dangerous height as Jim tries to stop her, leaving the contest overshadowed by their risky experiment and Graham's unresolved secret.
Key Events
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Emma Notices Jim's Troubles — Emma realizes Jim is hiding serious problems at home. Characters: Jim, Emma
Location: School
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Jim Goes Missing — On contest day, Graham learns Jim has disappeared and searches the crowded school grounds. Characters: Graham, Jim
Location: School grounds
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Dangerous Contest-Day Flight — Emma appears in flight gear as Jim tries to stop her and urges her to trust him. Characters: Jim, Emma
Location: Near a dangerous height