Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Second Chance
A recently released prisoner is urged to find honest work and admits that trouble often finds him before payday. He reunites with Major Rory McQuarry, and the two begin looking for a livelihood.
Key Events
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Prisoner Released — A recently released prisoner is urged to find honest work.
Location: Custody
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Trouble Before Payday — The former prisoner admits he often gets into trouble before payday.
Location: Unspecified
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Reunion with McQuarry — The former prisoner reunites with Major Rory McQuarry. Characters: Major Rory McQuarry
Location: Unspecified
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Searching for Work — The two men look for a way to make a living. Characters: Major Rory McQuarry
Location: Unspecified
A Reward and an Opportunity
After helping a woman in danger, the men are invited to dine with her and learn of her connection to Granny’s Globules. A valuable trinket and a debate over whether to accept it precede their unexpected business opportunity.
Key Events
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Woman Rescued — The men help a woman who is in danger.
Location: Unspecified
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Dinner Invitation — The woman invites the men to dine with her.
Location: Unspecified
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Company Connection — The men learn the woman is wealthy and connected to Granny’s Globules. Characters: Maxine Millard
Location: Unspecified
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Valuable Trinket — The woman rewards their help with a valuable trinket.
Location: Unspecified
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Gift Debate — The men debate whether accepting the gift is proper. Characters: Major Rory McQuarry
Location: Unspecified
Unexpected Directors
At a meeting arranged for Maxine Millard, the men are appointed joint managing directors and given broad authority to reorganize the company. Their substantial salary contrasts with their lack of conventional experience.
Key Events
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Directorship Offered — A meeting arranged for Maxine leads to the men being offered joint managing directorships. Characters: Maxine Millard, Basil Wantage
Location: Company meeting
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Broad Authority Granted — The new directors receive authority to reorganize the business and a substantial salary.
Location: Company meeting
Disruption and Doubt
Grimshaw resists the new arrangement and says the men's changes are worsening an already inefficient business. Production problems, a delayed Australia shipment, and fears about shareholder confidence raise the stakes.
Key Events
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Grimshaw Objects — The general manager is openly hostile to the new arrangement. Characters: Grimshaw
Location: Granny’s Globules
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Production Disrupted — Grimshaw complains that changes have disrupted production and an Australia shipment. Characters: Grimshaw
Location: Granny’s Globules
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Shareholder Alarm Feared — Grimshaw fears reports of company difficulties will alarm shareholders. Characters: Grimshaw
Location: Unspecified
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Confidential Warning — Grimshaw asks a journalist about investor reaction and urges confidentiality. Characters: Grimshaw
Location: Unspecified
Authority Under Question
Inspector Shearing finds the men through a newspaper article and challenges their authority. They invoke naval command and corporate procedure, but one hints that his past may make the position dangerous; the exchange ends unresolved.
Key Events
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Confidential Warning — Grimshaw asks a journalist about investor reaction and urges confidentiality. Characters: Grimshaw
Location: Unspecified
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Inspector Challenges Authority — Inspector Shearing traces the men through a newspaper article and challenges their authority. Characters: Inspector Shearing, Major Rory McQuarry
Location: Unspecified
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Naval Procedure Defense — The men defend themselves using naval command and corporate procedure. Characters: Inspector Shearing, Major Rory McQuarry
Location: Unspecified
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Past Record Raised — One man suggests accepting the job may have been a mistake given his past record; the dispute remains unresolved. Characters: Inspector Shearing, Major Rory McQuarry
Location: Unspecified