Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Machine For Tomorrow
Finch survives in an ultraviolet wasteland while suffering from a worsening illness. He builds Jeff to care for the dog after his death.
Key Events
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The Wasteland After the Flare — A solar flare has made Earth largely uninhabitable through ultraviolet radiation and extreme weather. Characters: Finch
Location: The ruined Earth
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Underground Laboratory — Finch lives in an underground laboratory where he searches for supplies outside. Characters: Finch
Location: Underground St. Louis laboratory
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Finch Faces Mortality — Finch is dying from an undisclosed ailment while preparing for his eventual death. Characters: Finch
Location: Underground laboratory
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Jeff Is Built — Finch builds Jeff as a humanoid companion to care for the dog after Finch dies. Characters: Finch, Jeff
Location: Underground laboratory
Leaving Before The Storm
A deadly storm approaches St. Louis, forcing Finch and Jeff to leave in a modified motorhome. Jeff begins the journey with incomplete knowledge and limited independence.
Key Events
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Knowledge Download Begins — Finch loads Jeff with encyclopedic knowledge and instructions for caring for a dog. Characters: Finch, Jeff
Location: Underground laboratory
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The Storm Approaches — Finch discovers that a massive storm will destroy St. Louis and kill him. Characters: Finch
Location: St. Louis laboratory
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The Westward Departure — Finch and Jeff leave St. Louis with the dog and helper robot before the storm arrives. Characters: Finch, Jeff
Location: St. Louis
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Jeff's Incomplete Mind — Jeff has downloaded only 72 percent of his data and requires continued training. Characters: Finch, Jeff
Location: Modified motorhome
Traps On The Road
Finch's health deteriorates after the travelers reach Denver. A hospital salvage mission exposes a human trap and leads to pursuit by an unknown car.
Key Events
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Lessons On The Road — Finch teaches Jeff about life and protecting the dog while Jeff's questions amuse and frustrate him. Characters: Finch, Jeff
Location: Modified motorhome
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Jeff Shows Initiative — Jeff gradually begins acting with more initiative as Finch's health worsens. Characters: Finch, Jeff
Location: Modified motorhome
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Arrival In Denver — The travelers reach Denver, where Finch becomes bedridden and cannot continue normally. Characters: Finch, Jeff
Location: Denver
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Hospital Salvage Mission — Jeff enters an abandoned hospital with the helper robot to search for supplies. Characters: Jeff
Location: Abandoned hospital in Denver
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The Bear Trap — The helper robot is crushed by a bear trap, forcing Finch to retrieve Jeff and escape. Characters: Finch, Jeff
Location: Abandoned hospital
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Human Threat Revealed — Finch realizes that the hospital area was deliberately prepared as a trap by other humans. Characters: Finch, Jeff
Location: Denver
The Narrow Escape
The pursuit causes Finch to crash beneath an underpass, but Jeff hides the damaged motorhome. Finch reflects on the dog and doubts he will survive.
Key Events
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The Pursuing Car — An unknown car follows them from the hospital and pursues the motorhome. Characters: Finch, Jeff
Location: Road outside Denver
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Crash Beneath The Underpass — Finch makes a panicked error and crashes through an underpass with insufficient clearance. Characters: Finch, Jeff
Location: Underpass
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Jeff Hides The Motorhome — Jeff uses his strength to squeeze the damaged motorhome out of sight. Characters: Finch, Jeff
Location: Underpass
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The Rescue Story — Finch tells a flashback story about rescuing the dog and begins losing hope of surviving. Characters: Finch
Location: Modified motorhome
A Quiet Inheritance
Lower radiation allows Finch to spend time outside with Jeff before dying. Jeff cremates Finch, reaches San Francisco, and follows evidence that humans may remain.
Key Events
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The Sun Becomes Safe — Ultraviolet radiation drops enough for Finch to step into sunlight without his protective suit. Characters: Finch, Jeff
Location: Road toward San Francisco
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Lessons In Fetch — Finch spends an afternoon outside teaching Jeff how to play fetch with the dog. Characters: Finch, Jeff
Location: Open area near the destination
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Finch Dies Quietly — After spending time with Jeff and the dog, Finch quietly dies from his illness. Characters: Finch, Jeff
Location: Open area near the destination
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The Funeral Pyre — Jeff cremates Finch in a funeral pyre before continuing the journey. Characters: Jeff
Location: Campsite near San Francisco
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Deserted San Francisco — Jeff and the dog reach a habitable but deserted San Francisco. Characters: Jeff
Location: San Francisco
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Signs At Golden Gate — Jeff finds possible evidence of surviving humans and sets out to find them. Characters: Jeff
Location: Golden Gate Bridge