Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Unproven Flying Machine
Jerry supports an ambitious remote-control aircraft invention in Arizona. A public demonstration attracts interest, but the device soon proves unreliable during an official aircraft test.
Key Events
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Remote Aircraft Invention — Jerry supports the effort to develop a wireless device capable of piloting an aircraft remotely. Characters: Jerry Barton
Location: Arizona
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Failed Commercial Interest — The inventors cannot persuade anyone to invest in or support their invention. Characters: Jerry Barton
Location: Arizona
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Golf Course Demonstration — Jerry helps use the model aircraft to attract attention during a golf course demonstration. Characters: Jerry Barton
Location: Golf course
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Aircraft Test Arranged — The demonstration leads to an arrangement for testing the device in a real aircraft. Characters: Jerry Barton
Location: Lambert Aircraft
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Model Lands In Puddle — The model aircraft lands in a puddle and drenches a nearby spectator. Characters: Jerry Barton
Location: Golf course
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Manned Aircraft Test — Jerry takes an aircraft into the air and switches control to the remote device. Characters: Jerry Barton
Location: Lambert Field
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Parachute Demonstration — Jerry parachutes from the aircraft to demonstrate that he is not piloting it directly. Characters: Jerry Barton
Location: Lambert Field
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Remote Aircraft Crash — The imperfect device fails, and the remotely controlled aircraft crashes. Characters: Jerry Barton
Location: Near Lambert Field
Return To The Workshop
After the aircraft crashes, Jerry returns to Arizona to improve the invention. A separate travel problem leads to a confrontation involving fuel, authority, and a forced household lesson.
Key Events
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Foreign Agents Observe — Undercover foreign agents observe the failed aircraft test.
Location: Lambert Aircraft
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Return To Arizona — Jerry returns to Arizona after the failed test to help perfect the device. Characters: Jerry Barton
Location: Arizona
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Hollywood Departure Plan — A planned trip to Hollywood is announced, changing the immediate domestic situation.
Location: Arizona
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Vehicle Runs Out Of Gas — A vehicle runs out of gas near Indian Springs, Arizona.
Location: Near Indian Springs, Arizona
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Beacon Fuel Theft — The travelers attempt to obtain fuel from an airport beacon.
Location: Airport beacon
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Jerry Tows The Vehicle — Jerry catches the travelers and tows their vehicle to the house. Characters: Jerry Barton
Location: Near Indian Springs, Arizona
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Threat Of Arrest — As a local Federal Aviation Administration official, Jerry has authority to arrest the travelers. Characters: Jerry Barton
Location: House
The Lesson Becomes A Crisis
The household punishment continues while enemy agents introduce a serious threat through a hijacked bomber. A surviving agent reaches the house under a false story.
Key Events
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Housework Punishment — The travelers are required to perform housework as part of a planned lesson. Characters: Jerry Barton
Location: House
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Punishment Scheme Accepted — The housework scheme gains support after it is described as a needed lesson for a spoiled person. Characters: Jerry Barton
Location: House
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Bomber Hijacking — Two enemy agents hijack a newly designed bomber during a test at Lambert Field.
Location: Lambert Field
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Survivor Reaches House — After the bomber crashes, one surviving agent reaches the house while pretending to be an accident victim. Characters: Jerry Barton
Location: House
Remote Control Triumph
The surviving agent hijacks an aircraft with hostages, forcing the remote-control invention into its decisive test. The device works, the aircraft lands, and the agent is captured before the final fines.
Key Events
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Aircraft Hostage Hijacking — The surviving agent hijacks an aircraft with two hostages after the truth is discovered. Characters: Jerry Barton
Location: House and nearby airspace
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Successful Remote Landing — The remote device finally works, allowing the aircraft to land and the surviving agent to be captured. Characters: Jerry Barton
Location: Near the house
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Final Fines — The real judge appears and fines the travelers for their actions.
Location: Court