Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Preparing for the Patrol
McNab leaves his family and prepares to lead the patrol. The soldiers pack, write letters, and adopt a cover story while receiving a mission briefing under difficult planning conditions.
Key Events
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McNab Leaves His Family — McNab leaves his family as the Gulf conflict approaches and prepares to lead the patrol. Characters: Andy McNab
Location: Before deployment
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The Patrol Prepares — The soldiers pack equipment, joke together, and write letters to loved ones. Characters: Andy McNab
Location: Patrol preparation area
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A Capture Cover Story — The patrol adopts a cover story in case its members are captured. Characters: Andy McNab
Location: Patrol preparation area
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Mission Briefing — The mission is to destroy a communications cable and locate mobile Scud launchers. Characters: Andy McNab
Location: Briefing area
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Strategic Stakes Revealed — The briefing warns that Iraqi missile attacks on Israel could fracture the alliance. Characters: Andy McNab
Location: Briefing area
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Difficult Planning Conditions — The patrol faces poor maps, limited intelligence, and heavy loads while planning its route. Characters: Andy McNab
Location: Briefing area
Crossing into Unfamiliar Ground
The helicopter takes evasive action before dropping the patrol inside Iraq. The soldiers discover that the terrain does not match their maps and spot a Scud.
Key Events
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Border Flight Under Threat — The helicopter faces a threat during the border crossing and takes evasive action. Characters: Andy McNab
Location: Helicopter over the border
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Patrol Dropped in Iraq — The helicopter drops the patrol inside Iraq. Characters: Andy McNab
Location: Northern Iraq
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Terrain Defies the Maps — The patrol finds that the terrain differs from its maps, including an unexpected plantation. Characters: Andy McNab
Location: Northern Iraq
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A Scud Is Spotted — The patrol spots a Scud while operating in unfamiliar terrain. Characters: Andy McNab
Location: Near the unexpected plantation
Exposure on the Route
Difficult terrain and limited resources make concealment hard as the patrol observes activity around the route. A local man spots the soldiers and runs toward the main supply route, creating an immediate risk of exposure.
Key Events
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Concealment Becomes Difficult — The patrol struggles to move and stay concealed with limited resources and difficult terrain. Characters: Andy McNab
Location: Along the route
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A Local Spots the Patrol — A local man sees the soldiers and runs toward the main supply route, risking their exposure. Characters: Andy McNab
Location: Near the main supply route
The Uncertain Withdrawal
The patrol attempts to contact headquarters but receives no clear response. McNab orders a southward move toward the rendezvous, but a bulldozer and nearby Iraqi troops obstruct the effort; the available account ends without revealing the mission outcome.
Key Events
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Headquarters Contact Fails — The patrol debates the exposure risk and tries to contact headquarters without a clear response. Characters: Andy McNab
Location: Field near the route
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McNab Orders a Move — McNab orders the patrol south toward its rendezvous, leaving equipment behind. Characters: Andy McNab
Location: Dead ground south of the route
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Bulldozer Interrupts Movement — An approaching bulldozer forces the patrol to wait and reassess its movement. Characters: Andy McNab
Location: South of the route
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Iraqi Troops Nearby — The patrol observes Iraqi troops nearby while trying to continue toward the rendezvous undetected. Characters: Andy McNab
Location: Field near the rendezvous route
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Evasion Remains Unresolved — The available account ends with the patrol exposed and attempting to evade detection; the mission outcome is not given. Characters: Andy McNab
Location: Field in Iraq