Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Wound Without Memory
Jack returns to Vermont after surviving a devastating head wound and begins experiencing amnesia. A roadside encounter briefly connects him with a vulnerable family before violence leads to his incarceration.
Key Events
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Head Wound in Iraq — A child soldier shoots Jack in the head, but he miraculously survives. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Iraq
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Return to Vermont — Jack returns home in 1992 while suffering periods of amnesia. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Vermont
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Broken Truck Encounter — Jack finds a distressed girl and her alcoholic mother beside their broken truck. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Vermont roadside
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Dog Tags Given Away — Jack repairs the truck and gives his dog tags to the young girl. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Vermont roadside
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Ride and Traffic Stop — A passing driver gives Jack a ride before a policeman stops them. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Highway
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Roadside Shooting — Jack is found wounded beside a dead policeman and the nearby murder weapon. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Deserted roadside
Judged by the Void
Jack is blamed for a policeman's death and is committed to a mental institution after his memory failure undermines his testimony. Becker's authority places him in an increasingly threatening medical environment.
Key Events
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Roadside Shooting — Jack is found wounded beside a dead policeman and the nearby murder weapon. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Deserted roadside
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Insanity Verdict — Jack is not believed because of his amnesia and is found not guilty by reason of insanity. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Courtroom
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Institutional Confinement — Jack is incarcerated and placed under the care of Becker and Lorenson. Characters: Jack Starks, Dr. Thomas Becker, Dr. Beth Lorenson
Location: Mental institution
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Unauthorized Treatment — Becker injects Jack, restrains him, and begins the unauthorized procedure. Characters: Jack Starks, Dr. Thomas Becker
Location: Institution treatment room
The Drawer Beyond Time
Becker's unauthorized sensory-deprivation treatment sends Jack into the future. There he encounters the adult version of the girl he once helped and learns that his own death is approaching.
Key Events
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Morgue Drawer Procedure — Jack is placed inside a morgue drawer for sensory deprivation. Characters: Jack Starks, Dr. Thomas Becker
Location: Institution morgue
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First Future Jump — Jack discovers that the treatment transports him fifteen years into the future. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Morgue drawer and future roadside diner
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Future Diner Meeting — Jack meets the grown girl from his past, who does not recognize him. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Roadside diner
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Dog Tags Revealed — Jack finds his dog tags and confronts the woman about their shared past. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Future apartment
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Death Date Discovered — He learns that records say Jack Starks died on New Year's Day in 1993. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Future apartment
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Repeated Future Visits — Repeated treatments allow Jack to revisit the future and build trust with the woman. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Institution and future locations
A Letter Against Fate
Jack repeatedly returns to the future and gradually gains the woman's trust. Lorenson eventually accepts his claims and helps him deliver a warning intended to prevent the girl's tragic future.
Key Events
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Repeated Future Visits — Repeated treatments allow Jack to revisit the future and build trust with the woman. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Institution and future locations
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Lorenson Treats Child — Lorenson risks her career by giving a friend's son one unsanctioned ECT treatment. Characters: Dr. Beth Lorenson
Location: Medical institution
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Lorenson Accepts Time Travel — Jack persuades Lorenson that his future knowledge and time travel are real. Characters: Jack Starks, Dr. Beth Lorenson
Location: Mental institution
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Warning Letter Delivered — Lorenson drives Jack to deliver a letter warning about the girl's bleak future. Characters: Jack Starks, Dr. Beth Lorenson
Location: Childhood home
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Fatal Accident Foreseen — The letter warns that the girl's mother will die after falling asleep with a lit cigarette. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Mental institution
The Future Rewritten
After a final injury and treatment, Jack reaches an altered 2007. The woman has a healthier life, her mother is alive, and their renewed meeting suggests that time may finally be on their side.
Key Events
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Fatal Accident Foreseen — The letter warns that the girl's mother will die after falling asleep with a lit cigarette. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Mental institution
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Icy Head Injury — Jack flashes back to Iraq, slips on ice, and strikes his head while bleeding heavily. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Institution grounds
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Final Jacket Treatment — Jack convinces sympathetic doctors to place him in the jacket one final time. Characters: Jack Starks, Dr. Beth Lorenson, Doctor
Location: Mental institution
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Changed Future — Jack reaches 2007 and discovers that the letter changed the girl's life. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Future roadside
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Hospital Offer — The woman recognizes Jack's head wound and offers to drive him to her hospital. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Snowy roadside
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Time Remains Open — A call confirms the mother is alive as the future remains hopeful and unresolved. Characters: Jack Starks
Location: Vehicle on the road