Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Faith in the Barn
Kathy discovers the fugitive and the children begin their religious delusion. They visit the barn, bring gifts, and reinforce their belief through Sunday School inquiries.
Key Events
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Discovery in Barn — Kathy accidentally finds the bearded fugitive and exclaims Jesus Christ. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Barn
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Sunday School Inquiry — Children question their teacher about Jesus, reinforcing their belief. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: School
Doubt and Danger
Adults appear and bullying escalates. The kitten's death and the vicar's explanation introduce cracks in the children's faith.
Key Events
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Barn Visit and Gifts — Ten children visit, bring gifts, and kneel before the fugitive. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Barn
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Newspaper Reading — Fugitive reads newspaper instead of a Bible story. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Barn
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Adults Appear — Adults approach, children flee, and fugitive hides in hay. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Barn
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Playground Bullying — Kathy is slapped by Raymond after claiming to see Jesus. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Playground
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Kitten's Death — Fugitive lets a kitten die, sowing doubt among the children. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Barn
The Manhunt
Police pursuit intensifies as Kathy retrieves the package containing a revolver. The birthday party slip reveals the secret to adults.
Key Events
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Kitten's Death — Fugitive lets a kitten die, sowing doubt among the children. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Barn
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Vicar's Explanation — Vicar explains why Jesus does not save every person and animal. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Church
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Package Retrieval — Kathy searches during the manhunt and finds the hidden package. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Railway Tunnel
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Revolver Acquired — Fugitive obtains a gun from the retrieved package. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Barn
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Birthday Party Slip — Nan slips cake is for Jesus, Charles corrects him. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: House
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Police Called — Father realizes the connection and calls police to apprehend him. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Barn
Surrender and Silence
The crowd converges, Kathy passes cigarettes, and the fugitive surrenders. Kathy accepts his fate and passes the prophecy to new children.
Key Events
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Police Called — Father realizes the connection and calls police to apprehend him. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Barn
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Shotgun Standoff — Father waits outside the barn with a shotgun. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Barn
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Crowd Converges — Nearly 100 village children gather at the barn. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Barn
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Cigarette Pass — Kathy passes cigarettes through a hole in the barn wall. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Barn
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Forgotten Matches — Kathy realizes she forgot matches and feels guilt. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Barn
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Forgiveness and Promise — Fugitive forgives her and promises she will see him again. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Barn
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Gun Surrendered — Fugitive tosses his handgun out and surrenders to police. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Barn
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Crucifixion Silhouette — Fugitive stands arms outstretched while being frisked. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Barn
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New Children Ask — Two very young children approach Kathy asking to see Jesus. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Barn
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Prophecy of Return — Kathy tells them he missed him this time but will be back. Characters: Kathy Bostock
Location: Barn