Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Cold Clerk
Fender struggles with workplace coldness and complains to his boss. He seeks out tailor Morrie to commission a bespoke overcoat, establishing his primary desire.
Key Events
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Funeral Opening — Funeral scene with coffin and overcoat Characters: Fender
Location: Cemetery
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Mirror Monologue — Morrie speaks to himself in mirror Characters: Fender
Location: Morrie's Home
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Cold Complaint — Fender complains to boss about cold Characters: Fender
Location: Warehouse
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Boss Ridicule — Ranting mocks Fender's coat affordability Characters: Fender
Location: Warehouse
The Fitting and Firing
The coat fitting reveals structural flaws, prompting a partial payment. Fender is abruptly dismissed from his job, leading him to seek comfort and cancellation from Morrie.
Key Events
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Tailor Consultation — Fender discusses materials and cost with Morrie Characters: Fender
Location: Morrie's Shop
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Coat Agreement — £10 price agreed for bespoke overcoat Characters: Fender
Location: Morrie's Shop
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First Fitting — Coat lacks arms, looks big, tight under arms Characters: Fender
Location: Morrie's Shop
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Partial Payment — Fender agrees to pay £2 deposit Characters: Fender
Location: Morrie's Shop
Death and Regret
Isolated in bed, Fender reflects on his lost job and unfulfilled desires. He coughs repeatedly and passes away peacefully in his sleep, marking his mortal end.
Key Events
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Partial Payment — Fender agrees to pay £2 deposit Characters: Fender
Location: Morrie's Shop
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Dismissal — Fender is fired by Ranting Characters: Fender
Location: Warehouse
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Brandy and Tears — Fender cries, requests cancellation, Morrie continues Characters: Fender
Location: Morrie's Home
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Bed Regret — Fender regrets not fighting for job or sheepskin Characters: Fender
Location: Fender's Bed
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Coughing Fit — Fender coughs repeatedly in bed Characters: Fender
Location: Fender's Bed
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Death in Sleep — Fender dies peacefully in his sleep Characters: Fender
Location: Fender's Bed
Ghostly Resolution
Fender's spirit appears to Morrie, and they visit the warehouse together. After acknowledging unfinished business, Fender departs for eternity while Morrie prays.
Key Events
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Death in Sleep — Fender dies peacefully in his sleep Characters: Fender
Location: Fender's Bed
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Ghost Appearance — Fender's ghost speaks to Morrie Characters: Fender
Location: Morrie's Home
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Sheepskin Desire — Ghost still desires sheepskin coat from warehouse Characters: Fender
Location: Morrie's Home
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Brandy Toast — Pair drinks more brandy together Characters: Fender
Location: Morrie's Home
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Wall Debate — Morrie asks to walk through wall, Fender chooses door Characters: Fender
Location: Warehouse Exterior
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Warehouse Entry — They enter and find jacket rail Characters: Fender
Location: Warehouse
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Quality Comparison — Morrie's work deemed better than Ranting's Characters: Fender
Location: Warehouse
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Debt Acknowledgment — Fender notes Ranting owes him Characters: Fender
Location: Warehouse
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Final Farewell — Fender wishes Morrie long life and asks for prayers Characters: Fender
Location: Warehouse
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Eternal Departure — Fender walks away into eternity Characters: Fender
Location: Warehouse
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Jewish Prayer — Morrie puts on skullcap and prays Characters: Fender
Location: Morrie's Home
A humble clerk yearns for an overcoat, but his employer's refusal and his subsequent death lead him to return as a ghost, determined to claim the garment with the help of a tailor friend.