Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Ascent of a Predator
Lou establishes his criminal foundation and acquires the necessary tools to enter the freelance journalism market. He secures his first deal with Nina and hires Rick, setting the stage for his ruthless career.
Key Events
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Rail Yard Theft — Lou steals materials and asks for a job, establishing his criminal drive. Characters: Rick
Location: Los Angeles rail yard
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Bicycle Pawn — Lou pawns a stolen bike to buy filming equipment and a police scanner. Characters: Rick
Location: Scrap yard
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First Successful Footage — Lou sells his first graphic crime footage to Nina, securing a professional foothold. Characters: Rick, Nina Romina
Location: KWLA 6 Newsroom
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Rick Hired — Lou hires Rick as his assistant to help capture dramatic crime scenes. Characters: Rick, Nina Romina
Location: Los Angeles streets
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Scene Tampering — Lou moves a body for a better camera angle, prioritizing footage over ethics. Characters: Rick, Nina Romina
Location: Crime scene
Rivalry and Sabotage
Lou outmaneuvers Joe Loder, sabotages his van, and captures exclusive footage after Joe's crash. The narrative shifts to professional competition and moral compromise.
Key Events
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Scene Tampering — Lou moves a body for a better camera angle, prioritizing footage over ethics. Characters: Rick, Nina Romina
Location: Crime scene
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Equipment Upgrade — Lou reinvests profits into superior filming equipment and a faster vehicle. Characters: Rick, Nina Romina
Location: Automotive shop
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Nina's Contract Pressure — Nina faces pressure to maintain ratings as her two-year contract nears expiration. Characters: Rick, Nina Romina
Location: KWLA 6 Newsroom
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Joe's Plane Crash — Joe beats Lou to a major plane crash story, gloating over the exclusive footage. Characters: Rick, Joe Loder
Location: Airfield vicinity
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Joe's Van Sabotage — Lou tampers with Joe's van outside his house, setting the stage for his crash. Characters: Rick, Joe Loder
Location: Joe's residence
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Joe's Crash Recording — Joe is severely injured in a crash, and Lou films the aftermath for profit. Characters: Rick, Joe Loder
Location: Highway
The Granada Hills Trap
Lou and Rick track gunmen, delay police, and negotiate under pressure, escalating the stakes. Ethical boundaries dissolve as profit and ratings take precedence.
Key Events
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Joe's Crash Recording — Joe is severely injured in a crash, and Lou films the aftermath for profit. Characters: Rick, Joe Loder
Location: Highway
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Granada Hills Home Invasion — Lou and Rick film gunmen leaving a triple-homicide scene before police arrive. Characters: Rick, Nina Romina, Detective Frontieri
Location: Granada Hills residence
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Footage Editing — Lou edits out the perpetrators from the footage to sell it to Nina's station. Characters: Rick, Nina Romina
Location: Editing suite
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Detective Interrogation — Detective Frontieri questions Lou about his connection to the home invasion. Characters: Rick, Detective Frontieri
Location: Police station
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Gunman Stakeout — Lou and Rick track one gunman, delaying police contact to ensure a dramatic arrest. Characters: Rick, Detective Frontieri
Location: Suspect's house
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Rick's Negotiation — Rick demands a raise and promotion, threatening to expose Lou's withheld evidence. Characters: Rick, Detective Frontieri
Location: Stakeout car
Blood on the Tape
The diner shootout culminates in Rick's death and Nina's ruthless broadcast of the footage. The story concludes with Lou's unrepentant expansion of his criminal enterprise.
Key Events
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Diner Shootout — Police arrive at the diner, leading to a violent exchange of gunfire with the suspects. Characters: Rick, Detective Frontieri
Location: Crowded diner
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Police Chase — Lou and Rick follow the police pursuit, filming a multi-car collision. Characters: Rick, Detective Frontieri
Location: Los Angeles streets
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Rick's Death — Rick is shot by the surviving gunman while filming, accusing Lou of knowing he was alive. Characters: Rick, Detective Frontieri
Location: Crashed Escalade
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Nina's Devotion — Nina is awed by the chase footage and expresses unwavering devotion to Lou. Characters: Rick, Nina Romina
Location: KWLA 6 Newsroom
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Cocaine Revelation — The news team discovers the home invasion was actually a cocaine stash theft. Characters: Rick, Nina Romina
Location: KWLA 6 Newsroom
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Evidence Withheld — Nina legally withholds the footage from police and airs it the next night. Characters: Rick, Nina Romina, Detective Frontieri
Location: KWLA 6 Newsroom
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Lou's Expansion — Lou hires interns and expands his operation, claiming he will not ask them to do anything he wouldn't do himself. Characters: Rick, Nina Romina
Location: New office
When Lou Bloom, desperate for work, muscles into the world of L.A. crime journalism, he blurs the line between observer and participant to become the star of his own story. Aiding him in his effort is Nina, a TV-news veteran.