Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Holiday Made Strange
Simon brings Louie to a rented summer house and disguises their forced escape as an imaginative holiday. Games and warnings about the water conceal Simon's anxiety and unresolved feelings about his own father.
Key Events
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Arrival Through The Window — Simon enters through a window despite having a key and turns the arrival into a burglary game. Characters: Simon, Louie
Location: Rented summer house
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Pirate Stories Begin — Simon makes the unfamiliar house exciting through stories about pirates, crocodiles, and strangers. Characters: Simon, Louie
Location: Summer house
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Water Is Forbidden — Simon repeatedly warns Louie to stay away from the water. Characters: Simon, Louie
Location: Summer house
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Games Hide Family Pain — They play and draw while Simon struggles with the attention he never received from his father. Characters: Simon, Louie, Simon
Location: Summer house
The Kidnapping Report
A radio or newspaper report reveals that police are searching for Simon over the alleged kidnapping of Louie. Simon extends the vacation and begins treating the house as a long-term hiding place.
Key Events
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The Police Report — A report reveals that police are searching for Simon over the alleged kidnapping of Louie. Characters: Simon, Louie
Location: Summer house
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The Vacation Is Extended — When Louie expects to leave, Simon claims the house has been rented for another week. Characters: Simon, Louie
Location: Summer house
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Food Supplies Disappear — The hidden pair run out of food, increasing pressure inside the isolated house. Characters: Simon, Louie
Location: Summer house
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Louie Is Disguised — Simon disguises Louie in a dress and later covers his head so he will not be recognized. Characters: Simon, Louie
Location: Summer house
Burned Belongings
Food runs out, Louie is disguised, and Simon returns to a former home for belongings. The resulting confrontation and the burning of Simon's possessions deepen the instability of the retreat.
Key Events
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Return To The Former Home — Simon attempts to collect clothes and belongings from a former home. Characters: Simon, Louie
Location: Former home
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Belongings Are Burned — A bitter dispute escalates when Simon's belongings are burned, with Angelique involved in the aftermath. Characters: Simon, Angelique
Location: Former home
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The Games Turn Aggressive — The games become increasingly aggressive as Simon grows angry when Louie disobeys him. Characters: Simon, Louie
Location: Summer house
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Louie Is Confined — After an outburst, Simon confines Louie inside the hideout. Characters: Simon, Louie
Location: Summer house
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Angelique Questions Simon — Angelique stays with them and questions Simon about the house and his reasons for returning. Characters: Simon, Louie, Angelique
Location: Summer house
Water And False Normality
Angelique stays with Simon and Louie while questioning Simon's motives. The bathing-pier crisis and motorcycle ride show the conflict between danger and Simon's attempt to preserve a holiday atmosphere.
Key Events
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Angelique Questions Simon — Angelique stays with them and questions Simon about the house and his reasons for returning. Characters: Simon, Louie, Angelique
Location: Summer house
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Challenge At The Pier — Louie and Angelique challenge Simon's fear of the water at the bathing pier. Characters: Simon, Louie, Angelique
Location: Bathing pier
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Simon Panics At The Water — Simon panics and tries to stop Louie from entering the water. Characters: Simon, Louie, Angelique
Location: Bathing pier
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Motorcycle Holiday — Simon tries to preserve the appearance of a holiday by taking Louie to ride a motorcycle. Characters: Simon, Louie, Angelique
Location: Road near the summer house
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The Hideout Is Exposed — A policeman suspects Simon is inside and calls for reinforcements. Characters: Simon, Louie
Location: Summer house
The Gun In The Hideout
The police search exposes the fragility of the hiding place, and Louie's anger turns toward lethal violence. Simon begs for the gun, but the confrontation ends with him wounded and apologizing.
Key Events
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The Hideout Is Exposed — A policeman suspects Simon is inside and calls for reinforcements. Characters: Simon, Louie
Location: Summer house
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False Alarm Relief — The search is briefly dismissed as a false alarm, but the family retreat has already been damaged. Characters: Simon, Louie
Location: Summer house
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Louie Rejects Simon — After reading about a drowning and thinking about his grandfather, Louie says he hates Simon. Characters: Simon, Louie, Simon
Location: Summer house
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A Gun Enters The Conflict — Louie hides with a gun and threatens to kill his father. Characters: Simon, Louie
Location: Summer house
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Simon Begs Louie — Simon begs Louie to come out and surrender the gun. Characters: Simon, Louie
Location: Summer house
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The Final Gunshot — A shot wounds Simon, who reassures the frightened Louie and apologizes. Characters: Simon, Louie
Location: Summer house
A divorced policeman loses custody of his young son, only to kidnap his boy and retreat to a remote cottage, where his plan soon turns into a nightmare.