Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Survival In The Ward
Michael survives an overdose and wakes in a hospital. Hunter, Rachel, and Joe bring him into their group and warn him about the supernatural danger surrounding suicidal patients.
Key Events
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Pill Overdose — Michael swallows a large amount of pills and considers writing a suicide note. Characters: Michael
Location: Michael's room
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Hospital Awakening — Michael wakes in a hospital after surviving the overdose. Characters: Michael
Location: Hospital
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Patient Group Invitation — Hunter, Rachel, and Joe invite Michael into their patient group. Characters: Michael, Hunter, Rachel, Joe
Location: Hospital ward
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Water Warning — The group warns Michael to keep water nearby because the demon hates it. Characters: Michael, Hunter, Rachel, Joe
Location: Hospital ward
Rules Of Resistance
Hunter explains that water and suicide notes can ward off the threat. Michael also forms a supportive friendship with Amy, who gives him a writing journal.
Key Events
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Hunter Becomes Roommate — Hunter becomes Michael's roommate and gives him more information about the threat. Characters: Michael, Hunter
Location: Hospital room
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Suicide Note Protection — Hunter explains that suicide notes can also ward off the demon. Characters: Michael, Hunter
Location: Hospital room
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Journal Gift — Amy befriends Michael and gives him a journal for writing. Characters: Michael, Amy
Location: Hospital ward
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Amy Reported Dead — Amy is reported to have fallen over a railing, but Michael suspects murder. Characters: Michael, Amy
Location: Hospital
Love And Loss
Michael is haunted by memories of Ben's death and receives comfort from Hunter. Their relationship becomes romantic before Hunter is brutally murdered.
Key Events
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Ben Nightmare — Michael dreams about Ben's death from exposure during a snowy camping trip. Characters: Michael, Ben
Location: Michael's nightmare
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Hunter Comforts Michael — Hunter comforts Michael after the nightmare about his former lover. Characters: Michael, Hunter
Location: Hospital room
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Michael And Hunter Unite — Michael and Hunter become lovers after Hunter soothes him. Characters: Michael, Hunter
Location: Hospital room
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Hunter Is Murdered — Hunter is killed by having his wrists slit in the bathroom. Characters: Michael, Hunter
Location: Room bathroom
The Quiet Room
Michael is confined after Hunter's death, while the nursing staff are attacked. Exhausted and isolated, Michael stops resisting the supernatural threat.
Key Events
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Michael Finds Hunter — Michael is discovered inconsolable over Hunter's body. Characters: Michael, Hunter
Location: Room bathroom
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Quiet Room Confinement — Michael is placed in the quiet room after Hunter's death. Characters: Michael
Location: Quiet room
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Examination Removal — Michael is removed from the quiet room for an examination. Characters: Michael
Location: Hospital
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Nursing Staff Attack — The supernatural threat attacks and murders the nursing staff while Michael is away. Characters: Michael, Amy
Location: Hospital
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Return To Quiet Room — Mentally exhausted, Michael returns to the quiet room. Characters: Michael
Location: Quiet room
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Michael Embraces The Threat — Michael gives up resisting and embraces the supernatural threat. Characters: Michael
Location: Quiet room
A Note To Live
Rachel and Joe interrupt the attack with the fire sprinklers, but Michael chooses to face the threat. His rewritten suicide note defeats it, although the final image suggests the danger may remain inside him.
Key Events
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Michael Embraces The Threat — Michael gives up resisting and embraces the supernatural threat. Characters: Michael
Location: Quiet room
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Sprinkler Rescue — Rachel and Joe trigger the fire sprinklers and interrupt the attack. Characters: Michael, Rachel, Joe
Location: Quiet room
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Michael Chooses To Stay — Michael chooses to remain behind and face the supernatural threat. Characters: Michael, Rachel, Joe
Location: Quiet room
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Living Suicide Note — Michael writes that he wanted to live and forces the note into the threat's mouth. Characters: Michael
Location: Quiet room
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Quiet Room Aftermath — At a later date, Michael, Rachel, and Joe happily play cards outside. Characters: Michael, Rachel, Joe
Location: Outside the hospital
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Water Possession Hint — Michael sees water spilling from a hose and reacts with terror, implying possible possession. Characters: Michael
Location: Outside the hospital