Plot Analysis Summary
A pastoral legend turns a blasphemous ritual into a crisis of superstition, violence, and feared supernatural punishment.
Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Oath Beneath the Alps
Senn and the shepherds swear to follow strict pastoral and religious rules. They pray and begin the seven-day journey toward Roccia Nera with the cattle.
Key Events
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The Swiss Legend — A legend recounts how three shepherds were punished after becoming entangled with evil. Characters: Senn
Location: Narrator's village
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The Shepherds' Oath — Senn and the shepherds swear to serve faithfully and care for the cattle. Characters: Senn
Location: Alpine pastures
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Rules of the Pasture — The shepherds promise fair salt distribution, obedience, and avoidance of wrongdoing. Characters: Senn
Location: Alpine pastures
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Prayers Before Departure — The shepherds repeatedly pray to God and the saints before leaving with the herd. Characters: Senn
Location: Alpine pastures
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Seven-Day Journey — The shepherds drive the herd toward Roccia Nera for seven days. Characters: Senn
Location: Path toward Roccia Nera
Superstition at Roccia Nera
At the remote pasture, work, drinking, jokes, and ominous charms coexist. Talk of a witch and a closed ring prepares the ground for a forbidden ritual.
Key Events
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Superstitious Talk — Rough jokes and ominous charms connect a witch's sickness with a closed ring. Characters: Senn
Location: Alpine pastures
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Arrival at Roccia Nera — The shepherds settle with the herd at the remote alpine pasture. Characters: Senn
Location: Roccia Nera
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A Crude Figure — The shepherds begin fashioning a female doll from food, drink, and sexual imagery. Characters: Senn
Location: Roccia Nera
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The Doll Takes Shape — They shape the doll's breasts, belly, genitals, and buttocks. Characters: Senn
Location: Roccia Nera
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Mock Baptism — The shepherds baptize the doll with holy water, schnapps, and a mock Christian formula. Characters: Senn, Sukkubus
Location: Roccia Nera
The Blasphemous Creation
The shepherds construct a crude female doll and perform a mock baptism with holy water and schnapps. The ritual increasingly suggests the invocation of a Sukkubus.
Key Events
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Mock Baptism — The shepherds baptize the doll with holy water, schnapps, and a mock Christian formula. Characters: Senn, Sukkubus
Location: Roccia Nera
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The Sukkubus Invocation — The blasphemous ritual increasingly suggests that the shepherds are creating or invoking a Sukkubus. Characters: Senn, Sukkubus
Location: Roccia Nera
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Storm from Susten — A storm approaches from Susten, forcing the shepherds to gather the animals. Characters: Senn
Location: Roccia Nera
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Prayers for Protection — The shepherds pray for protection as the weather becomes increasingly dangerous. Characters: Senn
Location: Roccia Nera
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Lightning Strikes the Cross — Lightning strikes the cross, making the shepherds fear that their protected peace has been broken. Characters: Senn
Location: Roccia Nera
Storm and Loss
A storm approaches from Susten, lightning strikes the cross, and the shepherds fear their protection has failed. Bruni is swept into a gorge and found dead.
Key Events
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Bruni Swept Away — The cow Bruni is swept away during the chaos and falls into a gorge. Characters: Senn
Location: Gorge near Roccia Nera
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The Dead Cow — Bruni is found dead and can no longer provide milk. Characters: Senn
Location: Gorge near Roccia Nera
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Blaming the Witch — In panic and anger, the shepherds blame and curse a witch for the disaster. Characters: Senn
Location: Roccia Nera
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Forcing the Cattle Together — The shepherds try to force the remaining cattle together and use the bull to make a cow produce milk. Characters: Senn
Location: Roccia Nera
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Packing to Flee — The shepherds pack up and prepare to escape the mountain. Characters: Senn
Location: Roccia Nera
Flight and Burning
The shepherds blame a witch, struggle with the remaining cattle, and flee the mountain. Later, a witch-like doll is made and burned as a supposed confirmation of the ban.
Key Events
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Cutting Through Obstacles — The shepherds cut through obstacles while fleeing with the cattle. Characters: Senn
Location: Mountain path
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Wake and Run — They repeatedly urge the boy to wake up and run as they leave the mountain. Characters: Senn
Location: Mountain path
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Return to Roccia Nera — The final account says men from the narrator's village return to Roccia Nera. Characters: Senn
Location: Roccia Nera
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The Witch Effigy — The returning men make another doll resembling the witch. Characters: Senn
Location: Roccia Nera
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Burning the Doll — They burn the witch-like doll and believe the ban has taken effect. Characters: Senn
Location: Roccia Nera
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Punishment for Sacrilege — The story closes with folk magic, religious ritual, and punishment for sacrilege. Characters: Senn, Sukkubus
Location: Narrator's village