Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Missing Data Visit
Maria and Frank visit Susan to discuss missing data and Edgar's possible trouble. Susan says she has not seen Edgar since he came to pick up Taylor.
Key Events
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Visit to Susan — Maria and Frank visit Susan about missing data and Edgar's possible trouble. Characters: Maria, Frank, Susan
Location: Susan's home
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Edgar's Last Visit — Susan says she has not seen Edgar since he came to pick up Taylor. Characters: Susan, Edgar, Taylor
Location: Susan's home
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Phosphene Visions — Someone describes seeing glimpses of the future by interpreting phosphenes. Characters: Susan, Maria, Frank
Location: Susan's home
A Vision Without a Timeline
A discussion of phosphene patterns turns toward glimpses of the future. One vision includes a gathering, blood, and Taylor saying a name, but its timing is unknown.
Key Events
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A Bloody Vision — A vision shows a gathered group, blood, and Taylor saying a name. Characters: Susan, Maria, Frank, Taylor
Location: Living room
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Search for Edgar — The search for Edgar and a missing paper makes the situation more dangerous. Characters: Maria, Frank, Susan
Location: Not specified
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Edgar Returns — Edgar appears and demands that Susan be released. Characters: Edgar, Susan
Location: Not specified
Edgar's Confession
The search for Edgar and a missing paper raises the stakes before Edgar appears and demands Susan's release. He admits taking company data and erasing server information, but does not explain the missing paper.
Key Events
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Server Data Confession — Edgar admits taking Double Star data and erasing information from the servers. Characters: Edgar, Frank
Location: Not specified
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Missing Paper Dispute — Edgar refuses to explain how he made a paper disappear. Characters: Edgar, Frank
Location: Not specified
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Rules Made Up — Frank acts as judge in a question-and-answer game with improvised rules. Characters: Edgar, Frank
Location: Not specified
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Helios Reprimand — The Kid is reprimanded after firing the Helios. Characters: The Kid
Location: Not specified
The House Under Threat
The Kid is reprimanded after firing the Helios, while the group tries to manage people who have been knocked out. Armed intruders search the house for Taylor's father and an important object.
Key Events
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Managing the Unconscious — The group tries to manage people who have been knocked out. Characters: The Kid
Location: Not specified
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Hiding Under the Bed — Taylor hides with another person as armed intruders search the house. Characters: Taylor
Location: Under a bed
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Taylor's Concern — Taylor says she worries about Edgar despite being frustrated with him. Characters: Taylor, Edgar
Location: Under a bed
An Unresolved Escape
Taylor hides and admits that she still worries about Edgar despite her frustration with him. She and her companion listen to the intruders demand the missing paper, while the group remains without a clear plan.
Key Events
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Intruders Demand Paper — Taylor and her companion listen as intruders interrogate someone and demand the paper. Characters: Taylor
Location: House stairs
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Escape Plan Stalls — One person wants to escape, another panics, and the group lacks a clear plan. Characters: Taylor
Location: House stairs