Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Birthday Far Away
Harry is away in London on business while his wife remains at their country cottage. A telephone conversation introduces Pointer's garden work and the couple's earlier problems with him.
Key Events
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Harry Works in London — Harry is away on business on his wife's birthday. Characters: Harry Clayton
Location: London
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Stay at the Wilson Pension — Harry spends the night at the Wilsons' pension while working in London. Characters: Harry Clayton
Location: Wilson pension
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Birthday Telephone Call — Harry speaks with his wife by telephone on her birthday. Characters: Harry Clayton
Location: Telephone connection between London and the country cottage
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Pointer Worked in Garden — Harry learns that Pointer had come to work in the garden. Characters: Harry Clayton, Pointer
Location: Country cottage garden
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Past Problems Resurface — Harry recalls earlier unpleasant experiences with the frequently intoxicated Pointer. Characters: Harry Clayton, Pointer
Location: Telephone connection
The Broken Connection
A strange sound and the memory of an unlocked back door turn an ordinary call into a threat. The manually connected telephone line is severed before Harry can ensure his wife's safety.
Key Events
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Strange Sound Outside — A strange outdoor sound makes Harry fear that someone is on the property. Characters: Harry Clayton
Location: Country cottage
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Unlocked Back Door — Harry's wife remembers that the back door was not locked. Characters: Harry Clayton
Location: Country cottage
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Connection Breaks — The manually connected telephone call is unexpectedly disconnected. Characters: Harry Clayton
Location: Manual telephone exchange
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Pointer Appears at Door — Pointer is revealed as the intruder outside the cottage. Characters: Pointer
Location: Country cottage
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Demand for More Money — Pointer demands additional payment for his garden work through the locked door. Characters: Pointer
Location: Country cottage entrance
The Intruder Demands Entry
Pointer appears at the cottage, demands more money, and threatens to enter. A false claim that Harry is inside fails to deter him.
Key Events
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Threat to Enter — Pointer threatens to force his way into the house. Characters: Pointer
Location: Country cottage entrance
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False Claim of Presence — Harry's wife pretends that he is inside, but Pointer does not believe her. Characters: Harry Clayton, Pointer
Location: Country cottage and telephone connection
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Harry Calls Again — Harry successfully calls the cottage again after the first connection fails. Characters: Harry Clayton
Location: Wilson pension
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Break-In Begins — Harry hears Pointer attempting to enter while remaining helpless on the telephone. Characters: Harry Clayton, Pointer
Location: Country cottage
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Neighbor Contact Fails — Mr. Wilson unsuccessfully tries to reach the cottage's neighbors. Characters: Harry Clayton
Location: Wilson pension
A Race Against the Break-In
Harry hears the intrusion over a renewed call while attempts to contact neighbors fail. The pension owner alerts the police as the threatened woman retreats upstairs.
Key Events
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Police Are Alerted — After failing to reach the neighbors, the pension owner alerts the police.
Location: Wilson pension
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Flight Upstairs — Harry's wife flees to the upstairs bedroom as Pointer enters below. Characters: Harry Clayton
Location: Country cottage staircase
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Pointer Enters Living Room — Pointer breaks into the living room and hears Harry's voice through the receiver. Characters: Harry Clayton, Pointer
Location: Country cottage living room
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Pointer Reaches Upstairs — Pointer comes close to the upstairs bedroom while Harry struggles to reconnect. Characters: Harry Clayton, Pointer
Location: Country cottage upstairs
Rescue at the Bedroom
Pointer approaches the upstairs bedroom while Harry struggles to reconnect the call. Two police officers arrive just in time, arrest Pointer, and allow the crisis to end safely.
Key Events
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Pointer Reaches Upstairs — Pointer comes close to the upstairs bedroom while Harry struggles to reconnect. Characters: Harry Clayton, Pointer
Location: Country cottage upstairs
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Police Arrest Pointer — Two police officers arrive at the last moment and arrest Pointer. Characters: Pointer
Location: Country cottage
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Harry Receives Reassurance — Harry's wife calls and tells him that everything has ended safely. Characters: Harry Clayton
Location: Telephone connection