Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Family Road Trip
The family drives home after a beach trip, sharing snacks and singing together. A radio report introduces slow traffic and the possibility of another tunnel closure.
Key Events
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Family Drives Home — A family travels home after a beach trip, with Anne asking how long the journey will take. Characters: Jeannette, Peter
Location: Road toward the tunnel
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Beach Trip Conversation — The family shares snacks during the drive home. Characters: Jeannette, Peter
Location: Car
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Traffic Report — A radio report mentions slow tunnel traffic, a recent closure, and the possibility of another closure. Characters: Jeannette, Peter
Location: Car approaching the tunnel
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The Boat Song — The family sings “The Boat Song” as they continue toward the tunnel. Characters: Jeannette, Peter
Location: Car
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Anne Rejects Fear — Anne says she is not afraid of the tunnel. Characters: Jeannette, Peter
Location: Car approaching the tunnel
Warnings at the Tunnel
Signs announce a closure and display unsettling messages, while Anne asks what will happen if the family has to wait. Her parents reassure her and say arrangements have been made to avoid getting stuck.
Key Events
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Imaginary Sheep — Anne's father asks her to close her eyes and count imaginary sheep. Characters: Jeannette, Peter
Location: Car
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Tunnel Closure Sign — A sign announces that the tunnel is closed, prompting Anne to ask about waiting outside. Characters: Jeannette, Peter
Location: Road near the tunnel
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Parents Reassure Anne — Anne's parents say closures are uncommon and the tunnel is not dangerous. Characters: Jeannette, Peter
Location: Car near the tunnel
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Arrangements to Avoid Delay — Anne's father says he has made arrangements so the family will not get stuck inside. Characters: Jeannette, Peter
Location: Car near the tunnel
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Population Reduction Message — The family sees a notice calling for tunnels to be closed and a message about population reduction. Characters: Jeannette, Peter
Location: Road near the tunnel
An Unsettling System
The family continues toward the tunnel as its safety system activates. An irregular lane change alarms Anne, but her mother attributes it to the old system.
Key Events
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Family Continues — Despite the unsettling notices, the family continues its journey. Characters: Jeannette, Peter
Location: Road toward the tunnel
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Safety System Activates — The tunnel's safety system activates while the family approaches. Characters: Jeannette, Peter
Location: Tunnel approach
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Irregular Lane Change — The car makes an irregular lane change, and Anne calls out in alarm. Characters: Jeannette, Peter
Location: Tunnel approach
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Old System Dismissed — Anne's mother dismisses the lane incident as a problem with the old system. Characters: Jeannette, Peter
Location: Tunnel approach
The Road Continues
The parents reflect positively on the trip, and Anne draws a flower that they praise. Children tease Peter, a parent intervenes, and the excerpt ends before the family reaches its destination.
Key Events
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Trip Recalled Fondly — The parents talk about enjoying the trip and seeing something different. Characters: Jeannette, Peter
Location: Car
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Anne Draws a Flower — Anne offers to draw a flower, and her parents praise the picture. Characters: Jeannette, Peter
Location: Car
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Peter Is Teased — Children tease Peter for being in love; he denies it and tells them to stop. Characters: Peter
Location: Car
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Journey Remains Unresolved — A parent intervenes in the teasing, and the excerpt ends with the family still on the road. Characters: Jeannette, Peter
Location: Road toward the tunnel