Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Proposal With a Condition
The Young Man asks for The Girl's hand, but her father doubts that he can earn a living. The Young Man promises to work and stakes his life on succeeding; her father accepts and lends him a revolver.
Key Events
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The Marriage Proposal — The Young Man asks for The Girl's hand and declares his love. Characters: The Young Man, The Girl
Location: The Girl's Father's home
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A Test of Livelihood — Her father questions whether the Young Man can earn a living. Characters: The Young Man, The Girl
Location: The Girl's Father's home
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A Desperate Promise — The Young Man vows to work hard or kill himself if he fails. Characters: The Young Man, The Girl
Location: The Girl's Father's home
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The Revolver Is Lent — The father accepts the proposal and lends him a revolver. Characters: The Young Man, The Girl
Location: The Girl's Father's home
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Weeks Pass — A few weeks later, a letter arrives from the Young Man. Characters: The Young Man
Location: Unspecified
The Sanatorium Claim
After a few weeks, a letter says the Young Man is in charge of a large sanatorium. Another letter reports a minor accident and his departure from the hospital.
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Weeks Pass — A few weeks later, a letter arrives from the Young Man. Characters: The Young Man
Location: Unspecified
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Sanatorium Appointment — He claims to run a sanatorium with 200 patients and operations. Characters: The Young Man
Location: Sanatorium
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Hospital Accident — He reports that a minor accident forced him to leave the hospital. Characters: The Young Man
Location: Sanatorium
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A Move to Wall Street — He says he has moved to Wall Street and is making money. Characters: The Young Man
Location: Wall Street
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Leaving the Exchange — He says he has had enough of the stock exchange. Characters: The Young Man
Location: Wall Street
From Stocks to Hamlet
The Young Man says he has moved to Wall Street and is making money, then reports leaving the stock exchange. His next change is a role in Hamlet.
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Leaving the Exchange — He says he has had enough of the stock exchange. Characters: The Young Man
Location: Wall Street
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A New Stage Career — He reports that he is now acting in Hamlet. Characters: The Young Man
Location: Theater
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An Enthusiastic Crowd — He says the crowd responded enthusiastically to his performance. Characters: The Young Man
Location: Theater
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Leaving the Theater — Despite the crowd's response, he says the theater does not suit him. Characters: The Young Man
Location: Theater
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Police on His Trail — He claims to hold a position where the police follow his every step. Characters: The Young Man
Location: Unspecified
The Police and the Revolver
He says the crowd enjoyed his performance but that theater is not for him. His account then turns precarious as he claims the police follow him, bringing the earlier revolver back into focus.
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Police on His Trail — He claims to hold a position where the police follow his every step. Characters: The Young Man
Location: Unspecified
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The Revolver Returns — The account returns to the revolver lent after his promise. Characters: The Young Man
Location: Unspecified
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The Failed Shot — The Young Man says, "I'm sorry, I missed." Characters: The Young Man
Location: Unspecified
A Missed Ending
The Young Man's closing line says he missed. The brief ending turns his earlier threat into a comic failure and leaves his fate and future with The Girl unresolved.
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An Unresolved Future — The ending leaves his fate and prospects with The Girl unresolved. Characters: The Young Man, The Girl
Location: Unspecified