Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Failed Sale
Ben discusses work, an important sale, and a promised holiday with Ellie. The sale collapses, and unsettling sensations begin at home.
Key Events
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Holiday Promise — Ben and Ellie discuss his exhausting work and promise to take a holiday after his important sale. Characters: Ben, Ellie
Location: Home
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Painting Sale Attempt — Ben tries to sell an old painting to finance the planned break. Characters: Ben
Location: Unspecified
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Buyer Disappears — The painting deal collapses when the buyer stops responding. Characters: Ben
Location: Unspecified
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First Unsettling Presence — Ben begins noticing the impression that someone is standing nearby. Characters: Ben
Location: Home
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Dissertation Exhaustion — Ellie struggles with an overwhelming dissertation and a severe lack of sleep. Characters: Ellie
Location: Home
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Advice to Relax — A friend encourages Ellie to relax and confront her feelings about a troubled relationship. Characters: Ellie
Location: Unspecified
The Hat Near Home
Ellie's dissertation pressure and sleeplessness coincide with disturbing household events. She sees a mysterious man in a hat, while Ben cannot see what she sees.
Key Events
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Cupboard Doors Open — Cupboard doors open by themselves, intensifying the couple's unease. Characters: Ben, Ellie
Location: Home
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Man In The Hat — Ellie repeatedly sees a mysterious man in a hat near the house. Characters: Ellie
Location: Near the house
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Ben Sees Nothing — Ben cannot see the figure or presence that Ellie describes. Characters: Ben, Ellie
Location: Home
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Fear And Frustration — Ben suggests that fear and stress may affect Ellie's judgment, causing further tension. Characters: Ben, Ellie
Location: Home
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Medical Examination — A doctor examines Ellie and finds no obvious physical problem. Characters: Ellie
Location: Doctor's office
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Sleep Medication — The doctor prescribes medication intended to help Ellie sleep. Characters: Ellie
Location: Doctor's office
A Presence Attached
Medical help offers no physical explanation, and medication is prescribed for sleep. Ellie reveals painful memories and becomes convinced that a supernatural presence has attached itself to her.
Key Events
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Grandmother Revelation — Ellie reveals that her grandmother raised her and that painful memories remain from her past. Characters: Ellie
Location: Home
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Presence Feels Attached — Ellie's distress deepens as she feels that a supernatural presence has attached itself to her. Characters: Ellie
Location: Home
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Specialist's Warning — A specialist warns that the entity may feed on weakness and negative energy. Characters: Ellie
Location: Unspecified
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Warning Against Surrender — The specialist urges Ellie not to let the presence in. Characters: Ellie
Location: Unspecified
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Alarming Grandmother Encounter — An alarming encounter involving Ellie's grandmother deepens the couple's fear. Characters: Ben, Ellie
Location: Home
The Unfinished Rite
The couple's conflict intensifies after an alarming encounter, a strangulation claim, and mysterious writing. A priest seeks help for an exorcism, but the former minister resists, leaving the outcome unresolved.
Key Events
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Relationship Breakdown — Ben and Ellie's relationship deteriorates as they disagree about the attacks. Characters: Ben, Ellie
Location: Home
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Self-Strangulation Claim — Ellie claims that she somehow strangled herself, but Ben struggles to accept the explanation. Characters: Ben, Ellie
Location: Home
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Mysterious Writing — Ellie claims that mysterious writing found in the house is connected to her attack. Characters: Ben, Ellie
Location: Home
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Priest Discusses Forces — A priest cautiously discusses unseen forces while Ben argues for a rational explanation. Characters: Ben, Ellie
Location: Home
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Refusal Of Supernatural Explanation — Ben refuses to accept that the couple's problem is supernatural. Characters: Ben, Ellie
Location: Home
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Urgent Rite Request — The priest seeks help from a former minister for an urgent exorcism. Characters: Ben, Ellie
Location: Unspecified
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Rite Left Unresolved — The former minister resists the request, leaving the planned exorcism and the couple's fate unresolved. Characters: Ben, Ellie
Location: Unspecified