Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Suspicion and Loyalty
Milos is accused of informing and tortured after threatening to seek a plea bargain. Rob asks the boss for advancement and is given an important delivery instead.
Key Events
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Milos Accused of Informing — Two associates confront Milos, believing he spoke to the police. Characters: Milos
Location: Unspecified location
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Milos Threatens a Plea Deal — Milos denies informing and threatens to take a plea bargain and enter witness protection. Characters: Milos
Location: Unspecified location
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Milos Is Tortured — The men demand the officers' names and torture Milos for answers. Characters: Milos
Location: Unspecified location
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Rob Seeks Promotion — Rob asks the crime boss for a promotion but receives an important delivery instead. Characters: Rob
Location: Unspecified location
A Promise Without Payment
Facing criminal charges, Rob is urged by his wife to accept a way out. The boss offers money for Rob to disappear, but the payment never arrives and the boss's men refuse to act without orders.
Key Events
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Rob Faces Criminal Charges — Rob faces criminal charges and fears receiving a severe sentence. Characters: Rob
Location: Unspecified location
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His Wife Urges a Deal — Rob's wife urges him to accept an offer that would let them leave their old life. Characters: Rob
Location: Unspecified location
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Boss Offers Escape Money — The boss offers Rob $500,000 to disappear overseas and claims this will keep him safe. Characters: Rob
Location: Unspecified location
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Promised Money Fails to Arrive — Rob learns the boss is prepared to abandon him, and the promised money does not arrive. Characters: Rob
Location: Unspecified location
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Boss's Men Refuse Payment — When Rob presses for payment, the boss's men say they will act only on their employer's orders. Characters: Rob
Location: Unspecified location
Danger at Home
Two men attempt to kidnap Rob's wife, but a neighbor's intervention lets her escape. Rob urges her to hide while she wants to go to the police, and he continues to believe the boss will pay.
Key Events
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Kidnapping Attempt at Home — Two men are sent to kidnap Rob's wife; a neighbor intervenes and she escapes. Characters: Rob
Location: Rob's home
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Rob Urges His Wife to Hide — Rob urges his wife to hide, but she wants to go to the police. Characters: Rob
Location: Unspecified location
The Choice to Remain Loyal
Rob captures and tortures the boss until he agrees to order the money from the bank. His wife then reports a better prosecutorial offer, but Rob refuses to turn against the boss, leaving the couple divided.
Key Events
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Rob Captures the Boss — Rob captures the boss and demands that he arrange the promised payment. Characters: Rob
Location: Unspecified location
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Drill Torture Secures an Order — Rob tortures the boss with a drill until he agrees to order $500,000 from the bank. Characters: Rob
Location: Unspecified location
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Prosecutors Improve Their Offer — Rob's wife reports an improved offer: annual payments and a house in exchange for turning against the boss. Characters: Rob
Location: Unspecified location
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Rob Refuses to Betray the Boss — Rob refuses the deal because of his promise to the organization; the couple remain divided. Characters: Rob
Location: Unspecified location