Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Spider In Purgatory
Gene narrates his death, his arrival in purgatory, and the strange dreams and compulsions that follow. The afterlife gradually reveals its animalistic nature.
Key Events
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Gene Narrates His Death — Gene explains that he has died and entered purgatory. Characters: Gene
Location: Purgatory
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Strange Dreams Begin — Gene describes strange dreams and compulsions affecting his afterlife. Characters: Gene
Location: Purgatory
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Animal Traits Emerge — People in the afterlife slowly take on animal characteristics. Characters: Gene
Location: Purgatory
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Gene's Spider Nature — Gene recognizes that his emerging animal nature resembles a spider. Characters: Gene
Location: Purgatory
A Chance Encounter
Gene drifts through Baja, Mexico, and meets Ana, who cannot speak English and is becoming caterpillar-like. Their communication failure leaves Gene dependent on intuition.
Key Events
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Drifting Through Baja — Gene drifts aimlessly through Baja, where he died while on vacation. Characters: Gene
Location: Baja, Mexico
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Gene Meets Ana — Gene encounters Ana, who speaks no English and is becoming caterpillar-like. Characters: Gene, Ana
Location: Baja, Mexico
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Ana's Tragic Past — Ana died while traveling to meet her boyfriend during an attempted kidnapping. Characters: Ana
Location: Baja, Mexico
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Communication Fails — Gene speaks no Spanish, so he can only infer that Ana needs help. Characters: Gene, Ana
Location: Baja, Mexico
Purpose And Threat
Gene chooses to help Ana after understanding that she needs assistance. He does not initially recognize the danger associated with her violent former husband.
Key Events
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Gene Chooses To Help — Gene decides to help Ana and gains a sense of purpose. Characters: Gene, Ana
Location: Baja, Mexico
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Hidden Danger Looms — Gene remains unaware of the danger posed by Ana's violent former husband. Characters: Gene, Ana
Location: Baja, Mexico
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Strange Behavior Witnessed — Gene and Ana encounter strange behavior while moving through the afterlife. Characters: Gene, Ana
Location: Baja, Mexico
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Ana Eats Leaves — Ana begins eating leaves as her caterpillar-like nature intensifies. Characters: Ana
Location: Baja, Mexico
Bestial Compulsions
Gene and Ana witness strange behavior and begin surrendering to their animal instincts. Ana eats leaves while Gene becomes obsessed with web-like rope.
Key Events
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Gene Wraps Objects — Gene becomes obsessed with wrapping everything in web-like rope. Characters: Gene
Location: Baja, Mexico
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Compulsions Intensify — Both characters increasingly give in to their bestial compulsions. Characters: Gene, Ana
Location: Baja, Mexico
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Corpses Become Wrapped — Gene begins wrapping corpses in rope as his spider-like behavior develops. Characters: Gene
Location: Baja, Mexico
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Gene Feels Shame — Gene feels ashamed when his behavior takes on cannibalistic implications. Characters: Gene
Location: Baja, Mexico
Predator's Resolution
Gene's compulsions become cannibalistic as he consumes corpses he has wrapped. He ultimately preys upon and consumes Ana's violent former husband.
Key Events
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Gene Eats Corpses — Despite his shame, Gene begins consuming corpses he has wrapped. Characters: Gene
Location: Baja, Mexico
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The Threat Converges — Gene and Ana remain together as the danger connected to Ana's former husband reaches its final stage. Characters: Gene, Ana
Location: Baja, Mexico
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Gene Hunts The Abuser — Gene preys upon Ana's violent former husband. Characters: Gene, Ana
Location: Baja, Mexico
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Gene Consumes The Abuser — Gene consumes Ana's former husband, completing his transformation into a predator. Characters: Gene, Ana
Location: Baja, Mexico