Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Stable Under Siege
Henry Sharon faces financial ruin because of Lew Ralston's rivalry. He responds by faking his death and arranging a protective bequest involving Certified Check.
Key Events
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Financial Ruin Threat — Lew's rivalry places Henry in imminent financial danger. Characters: Henry Sharon, Lew Ralston
Location: Stable business
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A Desperate Idea — Henry responds to the financial crisis by planning to fake his death. Characters: Henry Sharon
Location: Henry's stable
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The Death Ruse — Henry carries out a plan to make others believe he has died. Characters: Henry Sharon
Location: Henry's stable
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Horse Bequest — Henry arranges for Certified Check to pass to his niece. Characters: Henry Sharon, Certified Check
Location: Henry's stable
Losses On The Track
Jeff Clayton helps enter Certified Check into races, but the horse repeatedly loses. The defeats create pressure to understand what is preventing success.
Key Events
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New Racing Responsibility — Jeff begins helping place Certified Check into races. Characters: Jeff Clayton, Certified Check
Location: Racing stable
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First Losing Race — Certified Check enters a race but fails to win. Characters: Jeff Clayton, Certified Check
Location: Race track
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Repeated Defeats — The horse continues to lose in subsequent races. Characters: Jeff Clayton, Certified Check
Location: Race tracks
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Search For A Cause — Jeff and the horse's team seek an explanation for the repeated losses. Characters: Jeff Clayton, Certified Check
Location: Racing stable
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Rail Aversion Discovered — A tip reveals that Certified Check hates running near the rail. Characters: Jeff Clayton, Certified Check
Location: Race track
The Rail Revelation
A tip reveals that Certified Check dislikes running near the rail. An outside post at Santa Anita suddenly gives the horse a legitimate opportunity.
Key Events
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A Possible Explanation — The rail problem offers a concrete explanation for the horse's poor results. Characters: Jeff Clayton, Certified Check
Location: Race track
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Outside Post Opportunity — An outside post gives Certified Check a legitimate chance in the big stakes race. Characters: Jeff Clayton, Certified Check
Location: Santa Anita
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The Stakes Race Plan — Jeff's side prepares to use the favorable starting position. Characters: Jeff Clayton, Certified Check
Location: Santa Anita
Hiding From Sabotage
Lew Ralston's threat to sabotage the horse makes secrecy essential. Jeff works to keep Certified Check hidden until the important race.
Key Events
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Sabotage Concern — Lew's planned interference makes the horse's safety and secrecy urgent. Characters: Jeff Clayton, Lew Ralston, Certified Check
Location: Racing stable
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Horse Kept Hidden — Jeff works to keep Certified Check out of sight before the race. Characters: Jeff Clayton, Certified Check
Location: Hidden stable
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Rival Pressure Builds — The hidden horse remains exposed to Lew's effort to sabotage its chances. Characters: Jeff Clayton, Lew Ralston, Certified Check
Location: Santa Anita
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Arrival At Santa Anita — Certified Check reaches the setting of the decisive stakes race. Characters: Jeff Clayton, Lew Ralston, Certified Check
Location: Santa Anita
The Santa Anita Chance
At Santa Anita, Certified Check approaches the big stakes race with the outside-post advantage. The horse's chance to overcome its losing record forms the climax.
Key Events
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Outside Gate Advantage — The outside post removes the horse's known rail disadvantage. Characters: Jeff Clayton, Certified Check
Location: Santa Anita starting area
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Sabotage Threat Peaks — The race opportunity is endangered by Lew's threatened interference. Characters: Jeff Clayton, Lew Ralston, Certified Check
Location: Santa Anita
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Big Stakes Challenge — Certified Check faces the major stakes race with a genuine chance to win. Characters: Jeff Clayton, Lew Ralston, Certified Check
Location: Santa Anita racecourse
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A Legitimate Chance — The outside post gives Certified Check its clearest opportunity to overcome earlier losses. Characters: Jeff Clayton, Certified Check
Location: Santa Anita racecourse
A racetrack melodrama, The Long Shot features Marsha Hunt and Gordon Jones as trainers of a thoroughbred horse. Despite the rivalries of their parents, the couple prepares to jointly enter the Santa Anita handicap. The odds are against their entry, but Hunt and Jones have every confidence of winning. Just before the starting bugle, gangsters intrude, demanding that the trainers throw the Big Race.