Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Friend's Dangerous Invitation
Holden prepares to visit Anne, while Carla encourages Rachel to go out and involves her in a plan connected to Travis. Travis confronts Rachel with photographs and demands money.
Key Events
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Holden Plans a Visit — Holden prepares to leave town to visit Anne, whom he has not seen in nearly two years. Characters: Holden Avery, Rachel Avery
Location: Avery home
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Carla Urges Rachel Out — While Holden is away, Carla urges Rachel to go out and enjoy herself. Characters: Rachel Avery, Carla
Location: Unspecified meeting place
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Travis Enters the Plan — Carla has a plan involving Travis, and Rachel is drawn into it despite her hesitation. Characters: Rachel Avery, Carla, Travis Brewer
Location: Unspecified location
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Photographs Become Leverage — Travis confronts Rachel with photographs and demands $100,000. Characters: Rachel Avery, Travis Brewer
Location: Unspecified location
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Rachel Offers Jewelry — Rachel says the demanded money belongs to Holden and offers jewelry instead. Characters: Rachel Avery, Travis Brewer
Location: Unspecified location
A Scheme Against Holden
Carla continues pressing Rachel, and the two discuss making Holden's death appear to arise from a blackmail dispute. They consider fingerprints, a weapon, and a message intended to support Rachel's alibi.
Key Events
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Rachel Offers Jewelry — Rachel says the demanded money belongs to Holden and offers jewelry instead. Characters: Rachel Avery, Travis Brewer
Location: Unspecified location
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Carla Presses Rachel — Carla continues pressuring Rachel to cooperate with the scheme. Characters: Rachel Avery, Carla
Location: Unspecified location
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Death Is Discussed — Rachel and Carla discuss making Holden's death appear to result from a blackmail dispute. Characters: Rachel Avery, Carla
Location: Unspecified location
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Evidence and Alibi Plan — They discuss fingerprints on photographs and a weapon, and a message to Carla intended to support Rachel's alibi. Characters: Rachel Avery, Carla, Travis Brewer, Holden Avery
Location: Unspecified location
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Expected Police Explanation — They expect police to believe Travis killed Holden after Holden refused to pay. Characters: Rachel Avery, Carla, Travis Brewer, Holden Avery
Location: Unspecified location
The Plan Unravels
Rachel and Carla argue after events fail to go as expected. Rachel says she cannot continue, and they search separately for Holden near the road and a cabin.
Key Events
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Expected Police Explanation — They expect police to believe Travis killed Holden after Holden refused to pay. Characters: Rachel Avery, Carla, Travis Brewer, Holden Avery
Location: Unspecified location
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Rachel and Carla Argue — The plan does not proceed smoothly, and Rachel and Carla argue over what has happened. Characters: Rachel Avery, Carla
Location: Unspecified location
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Rachel Wants to Stop — Rachel admits she cannot keep going, while Carla insists they are nearly home. Characters: Rachel Avery, Carla
Location: Unspecified location
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Search Near the Cabin — Rachel and Carla set out separately to search for Holden, checking the road and the area near a cabin. Characters: Rachel Avery, Carla
Location: Road and area near a cabin
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Rachel Calls Investigators — Rachel calls an investigations office, but the call does not establish what happened to Holden or Carla. Characters: Rachel Avery
Location: Unspecified location
Anne Seeks Answers
Anne arrives hoping to see Holden, but he postpones their meeting. After he misses another scheduled meeting, Anne tells Clay that Holden has been missing and asks him to investigate.
Key Events
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Rachel Calls Investigators — Rachel calls an investigations office, but the call does not establish what happened to Holden or Carla. Characters: Rachel Avery
Location: Unspecified location
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Anne Arrives from Bakersfield — Anne arrives from Bakersfield hoping to see Holden, who asks her to come by the next day. Characters: Anne Avery, Holden Avery
Location: Holden's area
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Anne Worries About Holden — Anne is concerned about Holden's health and speaks with a doctor, but the conversation is cut short. Characters: Anne Avery
Location: Unspecified location
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Holden Misses Meeting — Holden fails to appear for a scheduled meeting, and Anne reports that he has been missing for some time. Characters: Anne Avery, Holden Avery
Location: Scheduled meeting place
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Clay Opens Investigation — Anne contacts Clay, who agrees to come to Holden's house and investigate. Characters: Anne Avery, Clay Fairfield, P.I.
Location: Holden's house
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Holden's Whereabouts Unknown — The story ends with Holden's whereabouts unresolved as the investigation is just beginning. Characters: Anne Avery, Clay Fairfield, P.I., Holden Avery
Location: Holden's house