Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Troubled California Summer
Kevin arrives in California with Megan to stay with their uncle Bob. Bob's financial problems, debt to Tony, and reliance on alcohol establish the danger surrounding the family.
Key Events
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Kevin Arrives in California — Kevin spends the summer in California with Bob and Megan. Characters: Kevin, Bob Ryan, Megan
Location: California
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Family Summer Visit — The visiting family settles into Bob's troubled California life. Characters: Kevin, Bob Ryan, Megan
Location: Bob Ryan's home
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Bob's Financial Trouble — Bob struggles with bureau finances and owes Tony ten thousand dollars. Characters: Bob Ryan, Tony
Location: Bob Ryan's management bureau
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Bob Drinks Through Stress — Bob starts and ends his day with Jack Daniels because of his problems. Characters: Bob Ryan
Location: Bob Ryan's home
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Tony Sends Collectors — Tony sends three collectors to recover the money owed by Bob. Characters: Tony, Bob Ryan
Location: Bob Ryan's home
Debt Comes to the Door
Tony sends collectors to Bob's home to recover money. Kevin witnesses the intrusion, and Bob removes the children from the house after Tony becomes furious.
Key Events
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Collectors Enter the House — Kevin sees three collectors enter the house to take fifteen thousand dollars. Characters: Kevin, Bob Ryan
Location: Bob Ryan's home
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Kevin Spots the Threat — Kevin realizes that Bob and the household face an immediate criminal threat. Characters: Kevin, Bob Ryan
Location: Bob Ryan's home
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Tony Becomes Furious — Tony becomes very angry over the money dispute and the collectors' encounter. Characters: Tony, Bob Ryan
Location: Bob Ryan's home
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Family Flees the House — Bob takes Kevin and Megan away from the dangerous house. Characters: Kevin, Megan, Bob Ryan
Location: Outside Bob Ryan's home
Kevin Chooses to Fight
Kevin offers to help Bob resist the criminal threat. Meanwhile, Megan goes to a club, where the attackers recognize her and create a new danger.
Key Events
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Kevin Offers His Help — Kevin tells Bob that he wants to help fight the bad guys. Characters: Kevin, Bob Ryan
Location: California
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Megan Goes to the Club — Megan goes to a club to meet the person she has a crush on. Characters: Megan
Location: Club
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Megan Is Recognized — The criminal attackers recognize Megan inside the club. Characters: Megan
Location: Club
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Kidnapping Threat Emerges — The attackers connected to Tony's pressure attempt to take Megan. Characters: Megan, Tony
Location: Club
The Club Rescue
Bob and Kevin search for Megan and reach the club in time. Kevin uses his karate skills to defeat the first attackers and protect her.
Key Events
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Bob Searches for Megan — Bob and Kevin search for Megan after learning that she is in trouble. Characters: Kevin, Bob Ryan, Megan
Location: California streets
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Rescue at the Club — Bob and Kevin arrive at the club before Megan can be taken away. Characters: Kevin, Bob Ryan, Megan
Location: Club
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Kevin Fights the Thugs — Kevin uses his karate skills to defeat the attackers threatening Megan. Characters: Kevin, Megan
Location: Club
A Larger Threat
A much larger enforcer arrives after Kevin's initial victory. The confrontation reaches a climax before outside martial arts help arrives and the immediate danger is halted.
Key Events
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A Larger Enforcer Arrives — A very large, tough enforcer arrives after Kevin defeats the first attackers. Characters: Kevin, Bob Ryan, Megan
Location: Club
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The Family Faces Escalation — Kevin, Bob, and Megan face a more dangerous opponent at the club. Characters: Kevin, Bob Ryan, Megan
Location: Club
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Outside Help Arrives — A martial arts rescuer arrives to help when the confrontation reaches its peak. Characters: Kevin, Bob Ryan, Megan
Location: Club
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Immediate Danger Is Halted — The escalating threat against the family is stopped after the rescue. Characters: Kevin, Bob Ryan, Megan
Location: Club