Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Difficult Return
Ruby, a single and penniless poet, moves back home. She resumes living with her mother, Jen.
Key Events
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Ruby Returns Home — Ruby, a single and penniless poet, moves back home. Characters: Ruby
Location: Home
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Ruby Lives With Jen — Ruby settles into living with her mum, Jen. Characters: Ruby, Jen
Location: Family home
The Family Gathering
The family prepares for Eliza's engagement party. Ruby's return places her inside a family event centered on her sister.
Key Events
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Ruby Lives With Jen — Ruby settles into living with her mum, Jen. Characters: Ruby, Jen
Location: Family home
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Engagement Party Preparations — The family prepares for Eliza's engagement party. Characters: Ruby, Jen, Eliza
Location: Family home
Respectable Neighbours Arrive
Strict Presbyterian neighbours descend on the family home for the engagement party. Their presence raises the social pressure surrounding Ruby.
Key Events
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Engagement Party Preparations — The family prepares for Eliza's engagement party. Characters: Ruby, Jen, Eliza
Location: Family home
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Neighbours Descend — Strict Presbyterian neighbours arrive for Eliza's engagement party. Characters: Ruby, Jen, Eliza
Location: Family home
The Shame Boundary
Ruby is given one clear responsibility: not to shame the family. The party becomes a test of her conduct within the family setting.
Key Events
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Ruby Must Behave — Ruby is expected not to shame the family during the gathering. Characters: Ruby, Jen, Eliza
Location: Family home