Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Farewell Holiday Begins
Edward arrives for a family holiday before his planned volunteer work in Africa. Patricia and Cynthia organize the gathering, while Christopher and Rose join as invited outsiders.
Key Events
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Edward Leaves City Job — Edward quits his city job and plans volunteer work in Africa. Characters: Edward
Location: The city
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Africa Volunteer Plan — Edward intends to promote safe sex and combat AIDS in Africa. Characters: Edward
Location: Edward's everyday life
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Family Holiday Arranged — Patricia and Cynthia arrange a family holiday and bon voyage party. Characters: Patricia, Cynthia, Edward
Location: Tresco, Isles of Scilly
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Chloe Is Excluded — Edward is irritated because Chloe is forbidden from joining the family holiday. Characters: Edward, Cynthia, Patricia
Location: The cottage
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Outsiders Join Holiday — Christopher arrives to teach painting, while Rose is hired as the professional cook. Characters: Patricia, Cynthia, Christopher, Rose
Location: The cottage
Pressure Beneath The Surface
Arguments and resentment develop inside the cottage. Edward begins to suspect that the holiday is intended to influence his decision about Africa and his uncertain future.
Key Events
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Absent Husband Expected — Patricia's estranged husband expresses a vague intention to attend. Characters: Patricia
Location: The cottage
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Island Beauty Emerges — The island landscapes provide the setting for Christopher's painting lessons. Characters: Edward, Patricia, Cynthia, Christopher
Location: The Isles of Scilly
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Family Tensions Surface — Arguments expose anxiety, resentment, and uncertainty about Edward's future. Characters: Edward, Cynthia, Patricia
Location: The cottage
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Ulterior Motives Suspected — Edward suspects the holiday was designed to change his decision about Africa. Characters: Edward, Patricia, Cynthia
Location: The cottage
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Edward Questions His Future — Edward appears increasingly unsure what to do with his life after Africa. Characters: Edward
Location: The Isles of Scilly
The Dinner Divides Them
Edward challenges Cynthia's decision to exclude Rose from the family table. A compensatory restaurant meal only worsens the conflict when Cynthia complains about the food.
Key Events
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Edward Notices Rose — Edward comes close to trying to seduce Rose during the emotional crisis. Characters: Edward, Rose
Location: The cottage
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Rose Excluded At Dinner — Edward objects to Rose being excluded, while Cynthia defends the separation. Characters: Edward, Cynthia, Rose
Location: The cottage dining table
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Restaurant Meal Arranged — The family invites Rose to a restaurant meal to compensate for excluding her. Characters: Edward, Cynthia, Rose, Patricia
Location: A restaurant
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Restaurant Argument Escalates — Cynthia complains about the food until Edward angrily walks out. Characters: Edward, Cynthia, Rose
Location: A restaurant
Rose Leaves The Island
Rose becomes fed up with the family's constant arguing and leaves early, leaving Edward a note. The island's beauty also makes Edward question whether he will continue with his African journey.
Key Events
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Africa Plan Weakens — The beauty of the islands makes Edward's planned departure for Africa seem unlikely. Characters: Edward
Location: The Isles of Scilly
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Rose Leaves Early — Fed up with the arguing, Rose leaves early and leaves Edward a note. Characters: Rose, Edward
Location: The cottage
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Edward Finds The Note — Edward discovers the note Rose left behind after departing the holiday. Characters: Edward, Rose
Location: The cottage kitchen
A Quiet Return Home
Edward and Cynthia reconcile with each other and Patricia. After saying goodbye to Christopher, they leave the cottage by helicopter and return to everyday life.
Key Events
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Sibling Reconciliation — Edward and Cynthia reconcile after their bitter disputes during the holiday. Characters: Edward, Cynthia
Location: The cottage
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Family Makes Peace — Edward and Cynthia reconcile with Patricia before leaving the island. Characters: Edward, Cynthia, Patricia
Location: The cottage
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Christopher Receives Farewell — The family bids Christopher farewell before packing up the cottage. Characters: Edward, Cynthia, Patricia, Christopher
Location: The cottage
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Cottage Is Abandoned — The trio packs up and says goodbye to the house without seeing Patricia's husband. Characters: Edward, Cynthia, Patricia
Location: The cottage
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Helicopter Leaves Tresco — Edward, Cynthia, and Patricia board a helicopter and return to everyday life. Characters: Edward, Cynthia, Patricia
Location: Tresco, Isles of Scilly
Deep fractures within a family dynamic begin to surface during a getaway to the Isles of Scilly.