Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Cigarette Begins a Bond
After fighting at school, Xiao-bu gives Angel her last cigarette and they smoke together. Xiao-bu wonders whether their shared habit helped make them best friends.
Key Events
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Fight at School — Xiao-bu and Angel have a fight at school. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: School
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The Last Cigarette — After their fight, Xiao-bu gives Angel her last cigarette. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: School
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Smoking Together — The two girls smoke together after the confrontation. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: School
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A Friendship Questioned — Xiao-bu wonders whether smoking made them best friends. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: School
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Borrowed Belongings — Angel borrows Xiao-bu's clothes and other belongings. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Unspecified
Stories and an Empty Pool
The girls share personal memories, fantasies, and a story about riders moving between past and future. At an abandoned pool, Angel dances and pretends to swim while Xiao-bu watches and laughs.
Key Events
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Borrowed Belongings — Angel borrows Xiao-bu's clothes and other belongings. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Unspecified
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Shyness and Secret Food — Xiao-bu recalls her shyness and secretly sneaking out for extra food. Characters: Xiao-bu
Location: Unspecified
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Shared Stories — The girls share stories and fantasies. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Unspecified
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Time Traveling Riders — They share a fantasy about riders traveling between past and future. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Unspecified
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A Mocked Letter — Angel mocks a boy's letter while the girls share stories. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Unspecified
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The Empty Pool — Angel urges Xiao-bu to join her in the pool despite its lack of water. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Abandoned swimming pool
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Swimming Without Water — Angel dances and pretends to swim while Xiao-bu watches. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Abandoned swimming pool
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Xiao-bu Laughs — Xiao-bu stays at the edge and laughs as Angel performs alone. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Abandoned swimming pool
Jealousy Comes into View
As adults, Xiao-bu's relationship with a man complicates her closeness with Angel. Angel questions her about lending him belongings and presses her to explain their encounter.
Key Events
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Xiao-bu Laughs — Xiao-bu stays at the edge and laughs as Angel performs alone. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Abandoned swimming pool
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Adult Closeness Complicated — As adults, their closeness is complicated by Xiao-bu's relationship with a man. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Unspecified
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Angel Confronts Xiao-bu — Angel challenges Xiao-bu about lending her belongings to the man. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Unspecified
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Questions About the Man — Angel demands to know what happened between Xiao-bu and the man. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Unspecified
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Xiao-bu Recounts the Encounter — Xiao-bu describes being touched and kissed, and her uncertainty about what she wanted. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Unspecified
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Friendship Strained — The account exposes jealousy and hurt and leaves their friendship strained. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Unspecified
A Birthday Promise Unravels
Angel calls on her birthday and asks Xiao-bu to take her for ice cream, recalling an old promise. Xiao-bu is occupied and does not come at first, leaving Angel waiting and angry.
Key Events
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Friendship Strained — The account exposes jealousy and hurt and leaves their friendship strained. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Unspecified
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Birthday Call — On her birthday, Angel calls and asks Xiao-bu to take her for ice cream. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Unspecified
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Waiting for Ice Cream — Xiao-bu is occupied with a man and does not come at first; Angel waits. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Unspecified
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Anger and Old Memories — Angel angrily curses things and memories tied to their relationship. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Unspecified
Tenderness in Retrospect
The argument returns to the man and the intimacy that has hurt their friendship. Xiao-bu closes by remembering Angel at the empty pool with affection, even as their present remains marked by distance.
Key Events
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Anger and Old Memories — Angel angrily curses things and memories tied to their relationship. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Unspecified
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The Argument Returns — Their argument returns to the man and the intimacy that crossed between them. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Unspecified
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Remembering Angel at the Pool — Xiao-bu recalls Angel dancing and swimming in the air with affection. Characters: Xiao-bu, Angel
Location: Abandoned swimming pool